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Reviewed By: Blue-eyed Floozy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 02:13 CST
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HaHA! I knew it. I KNEW IT!! She finally got the life of an ordinary woman. Now she doesn't even have miko powers. What will she do?! Where will she go? Esecially since now Inuyasha is seeing what he lost. A*hole. And what the heck? Kagome purifies people when she has sex? I don't get it. That was an evil cliffy you know. now I have to wait until you update to see what the hell Kagome decides to do. Seems like she's all gung-ho to go back to the future, but I seriously doubt Sesshomaru wil allow that. And will he be able to get through the well? You know, since Kags is his woman now. Sheesh, you must answer me with an update. Soon. Like ASAP soon. Tootles.
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Title: Uhhhh
Reviewed By: Blue-eyed Floozy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 02:08 CST
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Yeah, sorry bout that ouch. I kind of morph into MegaBitch when I get frustrated. But yeah. SUCKA!! Now he ges what he deserved! Still didn't answer my question about Naraku though. And what will Kikyo possibly do now that she doesn't have Inuyasha's heart in Seshomaru's body? Betcha she's scheming something. Ah, well. on to the next chapter! Thanks for posting them so quickly, btw.
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Title: Really good
Reviewed By: brower47 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 23:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Most of the Sess/Kag fics I see aren't developed enough to be believable relationship wise but you've succeeded where so many have failed. I'm really enjoying it. Keep up the good work.
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Title: Superb
Reviewed By: conchita [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 23:51 CST
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Just read every chapter you have to offer and the only disappointment I felt was reaching the end. Absolutely beautiful writing, excellent plot and amazing character development. One of the finest works I've read in fanfiction. Keep up the great work!
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: conchita [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished the first chapter and I absolutely love it. I haven't seen one like this before and you've done a great job so far. Now I'm too excited to say much more because I have so much more great reading ahead of me! I'll give another review when I've finished what you've written so far. Thanks for the great story.
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Reviewed By: Elixir of Destiny [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 19:25 CST
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I'm utterly speechless and so while I try to collect my thoughts and think of something coherent to say, I'm am completely in love with this story (and this is coming from a girl who is big on canon pairings and almost never reads SessKag pairings). I'm enamored with the way you have portrayed Sess, the air of dignity, calm and collected and yet also conflicted with these "new" human emotions he's feeling. I think I've fallen in love with his character all over again (he's just oozes sensuality and longing in this story). This chapter was excellent along with your others and I'm sensing your not too fond of Kikyou either, lol. Hope you update soon!
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Title: Huh?
Reviewed By: Blue-eyed Floozy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 17:06 CST
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Okay...WHAT?!! Was that Naraku coming back to life?! 'Cause I thought he was dead now! And what the hell? Kikyo got to be mortal again? How did that happen? So unfair for Kagome! Inuyasha deserved to be heartbroken and miserable with the knowledge that Kagome was with Sesshomaru and he had no one and nothing! Man! You need to write the next chapter quickly because I am caught at an impass as to what to think about your cliffhanger. Even I don't make as big of ones as that. I blow a raspberry in you general direction until you post again. Tootles...
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Title: Medeia
Reviewed By: Medeia [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 09:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're good, actually one of the best. But I knew that since I read all your stories :-) Merry Christmas!
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Reviewed By: intrigued1 On: December 21, 2005 07:43 CST
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I honestly don't know why this fic doesn't have more reviews. Very well written, a fresh plotline, and overall good character assessments. I do hope that Inuyasha can somehow find a way to make it up to Kagome but not before he suffers some angst over the possibility of losing Kagome to Sess. Have you thought about posting this at other sites like adultfanfiction.net? You might find that the people there are better about reviewing... It's a good fic overall. Thanks for sharing and keep the chapters coming!
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Reviewed By: BrokenTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 22:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story so far. I've been waiting for someone to write a story with more vocabulary, plus this is a first for me, reading this kind of story. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Elixir of Destiny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 10:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm in love with your story! The writing is absolutely exquisite and each scene between the characters is so descriptive, angsty, and entertaining that it's almost like you're there, watching each scene with a bag of popcorn and waiting for the next twist to occur. The characterizations are on point and the interactions, especially between Kagome and Sess are rife with sexual tension. I also loved the kissing scene between Inu/Kag, but you know what they "Inuyasha no baka." Considering I don't normally read non-Canon pairings and since this is a "quadrangle" instead of the typical "love triangle" and the way you've captured each's characters feelings and personality so aptly, plus the very original twist of the body switching in chapter 1, I can't wait to see how this turns out! Who will Kagome choose, even if Inu is regretting his past actions? The question has me on the edge of my seat. I also loved your very original story, "Don't Know What You've Got Until it's gone" and I can't wait to read more of this! Hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 19:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapters so far. I wonder if Kagome is ever going to forgive Inuyasha for his betrayal. And if she's going to fall for Sesshoumaru.
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Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 19:29 CST
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I like how you have things going here. I look forward to more. How will Kagome cope? What are Kikyo's plans? Inuyasha can be a dope sometimes, but his loss is Shessomaru's gain if he can only grasp it. I await your update.
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 09:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For a second, I thought Kagome was going to fall for Sesshoumaru. Is she? I look forward to the following chapters ^__^
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Reviewed By: gothic hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 13:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This certainly is an interesting story, totally reflects on Inu Yasha's usual habbits of not thinking ahead...any way, keep writing!
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