| "FFC One Shot: Touch the Screen" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Mileniua [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 14:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Very good! Too bad I wasn't chosen for the RPG, because I would have loved to do it! (N/A I read this a long time ago and never reviewed!)
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Reviewed By: dxgirly2 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 21:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Awesome idea fan.... I can't wait for the rp now!!
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Title: Dude
Reviewed By: DR On: December 08, 2004 00:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At least you didn't wind up in Legend of the Overfeind. (Shudders) Great job.
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Reviewed By: pardusardens [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Funny, cute, and clever. My complains are mainly grammar issues, and occasionally some spelling and punctuation troubles. It's got to be the most creative self-insertion of any type that I've seen before, though. I probably would have enjoyed it more if I actually knew the people involved in it; I felt in places, as a reader, like I was watching someone tell half of a joke I wasn't really party to. But, even with that, it was pretty good, so I'm sure it's even better for people who are 'in on it,' so to speak. I'm REALLY not a big fan of self-insertion fics (I've tried writing a couple before, and they were generally pretty wretched), so the fact that I don't think this one sucks says a lot about how good it must be. I think that's all I've got to say!
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Reviewed By: Magic Beans X3 On: February 15, 2002 19:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I dont really get this whole rating system so ill just say... Two thumbs up man! Good job... although ive never seen bubble gum its pretty good! |
Reviewed By: Jehosi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2002 18:10 CST
Comment/Review:
lol! This was great. I loved it. Great job! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2002 07:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw man that was so original! The descriptions were perfect, and the characters... ahem well the characters were of course fantastic :) That was a really good read... even tho i didn't have a clue as to the anime side of it... my ignorance is painful lol |
Reviewed By: Dark Jades [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2002 17:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh girl, that was incredible! I've never read anything quite like it. Writing style was wonderful, characters were beyond amazing (lol...we were in there! You used us!) and the descriptions were perfect...just as I had imagined them. Simple awesome! Do another! |
Reviewed By: Sytar Madison [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2002 16:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Not bad fanilia. I really liked it though you should write another and use the rest of us more. Please??? I really did love this story, it was great and fun to read so please do another!!! I didn't find anything wrong with it or anything. Keep writing. |
Reviewed By: Dezz [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2002 23:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow, it was really entertaining to read about myself through another person's mind. I'm such a hentai. Not as bad as fanboy, tho. =P Thank you Fanilia! Your fic was utterly hilarious, I loved every bit of it. I especially liked the comment about the forum members reading posts, staring at text and avatars since it is indeed true. I'll get my revenge on Fanboy tho, just you wait. =) |
