| "Thawing the heart of a prince" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: otaku4life [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 23:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
All right guys, I know you guys are giving me some good reviews. Thank you sooo much. This is actually my old work, which I wrote quick for school. It was literally in an hour. So it's noty that good. But I will update this evetually. *procrastination*
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Title: er.. Good
Reviewed By: Star575 On: August 16, 2007 19:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story was good i really enjoyed it, but you rush into the plot to soon. Just take your time and I promise You will have so many great stories. i know, because I can tell you are a great writer. I love your orginality. But all in all that was a great fic!!!!!!!!!
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Title: eh
Reviewed By: eh On: January 03, 2006 16:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
FontColor a lil awkward knowing vegeta's personality then reading your little story...:/
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Title: ~Raccly e.r 17
Reviewed By: raccly er 17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 21:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic is good, but would be great if you didn't rush it so much. I mean, I luv your plot in the story, but your details....you could use ALOT more details... ~Raccly e.r 17
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