| "The Academy" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: HOHOHOHOHOHOHO On: May 21, 2007 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice sweet and any other really asome(wow theres one) words you can think of sooooo update NOW AND NOW MEANS NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please ta ta lovys
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 23:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahahahahaha my god i LOVE THIS!!!!! please keep going!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: HOWL_TO_THE_DARKMOON [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 15:46 CST
Comment/Review:
update it soon!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 00:45 CST
Comment/Review:
~claps~ awesome story!!! it is very captivating!!! i like it loads!!! keep up the great work. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 12:02 CST
Comment/Review:
You have a good start on this. Both of you show writing talent and the ability to tell a story. There were some issues that took away from the story. First the formatting of the third chapter looked as if it were copied from an email, I'd fix the formatting there to keep the story looking uniform. I did see some glaring grammar issues that use of a beta or a review service could help. There are some services on and off the site you might try. One is the Beta readers forum. (located in the forums here) There you can find someone who likes and is good at proof reading your chapters to help you correct mistakes you might have overlooked. The other is FFRG the review service that you can post a single chapter at a time to and it is reviewed with indepth constructive critism (by fellow authors) to help you see your strong points as well as show you where you could use some work. The off site service I mentioned is called 'you have been reviewed' (copy and paste to view the porfile and link to the you have been reviewed site: http://www.mediaminer.org/user_info.php/129320) This person is not affilated with our site but is known for indeapth and honest reviews of the entire story. Overall the story was interesting and the characters although in an AU do still retain some of the basic personality traits that make them who they are in the series. The chapters are not long but the information conveyed in each seems to break nicely where you ended each chapter. If you are writing strictly for fun, you are doing fine. However if you are serious in your developement as a writer, I would suggest trying some of these free and useful services. There is a spark in what I have read here, I enjoyed reading your story, thank you.~Fanilia
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Title: all
Reviewed By: kagome&inuyasha4eva On: January 01, 2006 19:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait till you add more to it because when i was reading all the chapters i just couldn't wait to read what was going to happen next i have enjoy your whole story and hope for an update really soon. From, kagome&inuyasha4eva
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Reviewed By: sailor saturn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 21:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME!!! UPDATE ASAP!!
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Reviewed By: InuBaby369246 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 01:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, I'm the second reviewer! (Is that how you spell it?) This looks like it's going to be GOOD. Can't wait until you update
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 00:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh cool i love bein the first reviewer ^.^ Very cute story. i get a kick outta picturing Inuyasha and Sesshomaru of all people as dancers lol. Aynway update soon, i cant wait! ^.~
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