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| "Baking A Delicious Treat" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Secret Ingredient...
Reviewed By: Sleep Remedy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2006 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooo... I wonder if that really makes them taste better? I bet it does. *smiles deviously* Anyways, I really liked this! The only thing I would ask for is more dialogue. Other than that, I really loved it. Much love, Sleepy.
| Reviewed By: Secret411 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 15:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was excellent hentai and was show very well.Great job!
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