| "Mouse Trap" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Ray-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 13:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Don't stop writing! If you stop, thats just wasted imagination! Wasted imagination sucks! So please continue!Its really good, most of my stories are OC because I'm not good at making other characters stray from the manga, unless I have a character I made to guide it....... You have good imagination, yesh.
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Reviewed By: Jussy On: July 31, 2006 12:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This really great, close to the manga - but the chapters seems kinda' short. No complaints, tho, I enjoyed it alot. Ayame is hysterical! Thanks! -Jussy
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Title: Hehe, cute
Reviewed By: InuNekoHalf-Breed [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2006 16:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story. It's so cute! Yuki's all nervous and Kyou actually cares even if he's not sure about how to go about doing it and it's against his caty nature but now Tohru's a mommy! :-) Well... sort of. I just think it's wonderful - go you!
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Reviewed By: inu_lover_4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2006 04:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this story...please update soon so I can read more...hehe, tata!!!!
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Title: I like your story
Reviewed By: kanti89 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2006 18:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought you're story is sad but interesting! I think you should write more. I want to find out what happens!!! ^^ Keep up the good work! ~Kanti
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Title: Cool!
Reviewed By: foxfire79 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2006 00:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great so far, can't wait to read more! Please update soon! :)
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Title: i like it
Reviewed By: katgirlofthenight [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it so far, it's pretty funny. please continue it!
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