| Reviewed By: rainsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 20:47 CST|
Style of Writing: 7 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
This story is really good! But, you really should explain why his pokemon can do that, make their attacks boomerang. And your battles aren't really interesting.