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 Reviewed By: #Inu  On: June 03, 2018 11:52 PDT
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Whereâ€& #8482;s Inuyasha?
 Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 12, 2013 14:25 PDT
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having reread this, i just realized a few things. and its a little disconcerting. she had sex with evan and his cousin (slutty). but im not judging maddy cuz i like her lol. but there's that one word that stands out to me. "Familiar" (The youkai hint for mate in this universe) hmmm. I know you've always said that gunnars story would be the last you'd write since toga's was the beginning of the Purity universe sequels. but now i'm thinking that may intertwine with maddy's story as well. *wink wink* And if that is the case i'm thinking ummmm awkward how do u mate a man who's cousin you had ongoing sexual (though not lovemaking) trysts with? oh dear lol. but anyways this story takes place during P9 but it was written/updated in 2008? geez have you really been writing p9 for 5 years? somehow i don't think u have idk. but i do realizze that i've been reading you fanfiction and original stories for many years now. and yes i've read all the fanfiction and will soon be purchasing the originals. they will be something to read on deployment. (Love you sue!)
 Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 26, 2012 00:44 PST
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Ohmagod, that was beyond cute...I live for your Evan stories. I had a wonderful Christmas, beyond what I expected, and then came home to your oneshot. Of course I laughed myself stupid. I don't think I would have lived thru raising a child like Even...he would have gotten away with MURDER. I would have been laughing too hard to discipline him...Thank you sue for the perfect Christmas present. I'm sending you a box of chocolate covered cherries...
 Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 25, 2012 22:10 PST
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Merry Christmas, Sue! Thank you for the one-shot!
 Title: The birth of Roka
Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 25, 2012 18:43 PST
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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How cute was that? I love the dynamics you portray. The older boys helping but being annoyed, Evan noticing it but not really understanding it. Cain's love for Evan really shines in this story too. TRIPLETS? My goodness! Like Valarie didn't have enough on her plate with there father! ;) Merry Christmas Sueric!
 Reviewed By: demon13 [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 25, 2012 15:40 PST
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I LOVED the chapter! I'm a little confused though, about the triplet siblings? Hayden Daniella and Connor? I thought Gin and Cain only had Daniella?
 Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 05, 2011 01:06 PDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Lovely darlin', I've never done this so it was really sweet to read about :)
 Title: The Christmas Cake...**sniggers**
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 28, 2010 04:30 PST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
... **sniggers some more** That was just so cute and sweet and...FUNNY! You, Sue, have a knack for typing awesome chapters/Oneshots RIGHT when I'm at my lowest, GUARANTEEING my laughter and a lightening of moods! Again, lovely reading more about the Purity characters as kids/younger parents and this was a great read to go along with the Holidays (while I was relaxing in a quiet room sans sugar-hyped children and alcohol-sily "adults". I think they thought I was drunk, too, with all the giggles, cackles and deep belly laughs I ripped. Hope your Chirstimas was wonderful for you and yours! I had a surprisingly nice one, on my end! NEwho, 75 pages of pure Purity gold! Thanks for all your hard work! **hugs** Happy New Year, Sue!
 Title: silent night
Reviewed By: nish04 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 09, 2010 17:36 PST
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it's amazing how u make these character's come to life-i almost feel like they're real! *sigh* you had me laughing my butt off outloud throughout this whole fic! ps- I ADORE EVAN!
 Title: Loved it
Reviewed By: mannd1068 [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 20, 2009 08:50 PST
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Excellent and very funny.
 Reviewed By: xbitternessx [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 03, 2009 23:13 PST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Wow. I read both of your new one-shots today. I won't go into how many times I've read the series, but there's always those amazing scenes that send me right back to the first one, and Bella's birthday was definitely one of them. Even though I've pretty much left the Inuyasha fandom and returned to Buffy, my first love, I still check my inbox every day for Purity, and when it's not there, I completely understand, but I do actually pout. =) You have my respect forever for taking on such a huge storyline, and making each installment amazing and unique.
 Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 03, 2009 17:08 PST
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I don't remember if I commented on this. I read it earlier this week and found it AMAZING! It's so cute. One of my favorite people (Kichiro) in a wonderful story with the WHOLE family. Great!! Can't wait for the new chapter of Subterfuge!! -MSMND
 Reviewed By: Geminia [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 15, 2009 01:44 PDT
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"Bas rolled his eyes but chuckled. It was always the same with Evan: he always wanted a Marvin the Martian shaped ice cream bar, and he always wanted to bite his head off. Come to think of it, Evan had actually gotten into a fist fight with a boy in his preschool class named Marvin, as well. `Must be something about guys named Marvin,' Bas mused to himself as he picked Jillian up and headed toward the parking area where the ice cream truck always stopped." I read this and just began to laugh and laugh and laugh. Figures his would be mate is about to marry a guy named Marvin, it would be too hilarious if they were the same person.
 Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 26, 2009 18:48 PST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I LOVED THIS ONESHOT IT WAS AWSOME AND FUNNY!!!I WAS LAUGHING SO HARD I WAS ON THE FLOOR STILL LAUGHING.LOLZ!!!
 Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 26, 2009 16:16 PST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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VERY FUNNY WOWZ THEY WERE DRUNK LOLZ!!
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