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 Title: Hmmm, looks like I hafta review again...no matter...the ratings will always stay the same:
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 06, 2008 10:24 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Okay, which to start on...hmmm...Potentate is the first one I realized was gone, so... What to say about Bugs, first of all...than rabbit is hysterically funny. I have buds like him and they never cease to make me shake me head in humor. The flirting with Gunnar was just HELLAFUNNY! The convo with Madison, beforehand, was beyond explanation. But, I'll try. For one, his fixation on Evan is just too much! **snort** These lines come to mind ~~Bugs waved his hand dismissively, his deep scarlet nail polish flashing in the ambient light. "If only Zel would admit that he really is gay somewhere deep, deep down," he lamented. Madison giggled since the odds of that happening were slim and none. Evan Roka Zelig, aka Zel Roka, was much too addicted to women on the whole to ever miraculously turn gay. "The day Zel Roka goes gay is the day that the world will stop spinning, sweetie," she pointed out. Bugs wrinkled his nose though not enough to upset the film of pale powder he'd dusted over his face. "A girl can dream, can't she?" he pouted.~~ And when THIS PART: "I told you, luvvie . . . if you'd get rid of those lumps of fat and grow a pee-pee, I'd be happy to drag you off to my bed, too!"~~ I nearly passed out from asphyxiation. Of course, the chemistry, even for the night, with Gunnar and Maddie was HAWT! It was classy, it was seductive, it was steamy, and it was the reason I need to replace the pipes in my shower!!! **blushes** I LOVED Maddie's forthrightness. These lines come to mind ~~"Why don't we skip the pretenses?" she suggested, her tone low, husky, caressing. "Are you always this forward?" Gunnar asked, cocking one eyebrow in mock surprise. "Did you want to play that game?" she countered, arching an eyebrow of her own. Gunnar's gaze narrowed, but he couldn't help the chuckle that escaped as he took her glass and set both aside on the table beside the sofa. "Games aren't really my style." A catty little smile tilted the corners of her lips as she slowly reached out to trail her fingers down the center of his chest, the scrape of her claws against the cotton fabric resounding in his ears like thunder. "Mine, either," she allowed, smiling as his muscles tensed and jerked beneath her casual perusal. "Still, there's something to be said about women who don't come on too strong," he pointed out. Madison laughed softly, hands dropping to run her fingertips along the waistband of his pants. "True enough, I suppose," she allowed with an exaggerated sense of concentration. "Then again, why bother with silly pretenses when you and I both know that I'm not nearly that naïve?" "Point taken,"~~ Then, the action begins! To quote JJ from 'Good Times' that lovely piece of citrus was DYNOMITE! DAMN, Gunnar has stamina! I can appreciate the afterthoughts, the concern for the lines crossed after the fact, from Gunnar. All in all, it was a fantastic read! Funny, sexy, and always introspective! Another favorite, SUE!
 Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 31, 2007 08:54 PST
Comment/Review:
Impending Doom; I adored "The Great King of Youkai" groveling to his mate XD SesshoMaru should drink sake more often... Pure Desecration; Would it be twisted to say that this is my favourite oneshot? Just think if you did it this year... there're so many charcters now, the blood would just FLOOD... muahahaha...
 Reviewed By: Blue Siren [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 14, 2007 20:53 PDT
Rating(s):
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ooh this was messed up! funny and disturbing at the same time> Now I'm gonna hafta read the other 400 chapters of Purity, to know who all these people were ^^ Great job!
 Title: so, this one is on 'Desecration'...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 30, 2007 11:26 PDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i laffed, i cried (laffing), i almost didn't make it to the potty (no more super big gulps full of Slurpee for ME! lol! but, hey...at least Gin gets to date (i'm evil, i know...tee hee hee hee...kukukukukukuku!)
 Title: HIL-friggin-ARIOUS, Sue!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 30, 2007 11:24 PDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this is SO like the brothers and the whole Shippou-in-the-middle thing was heckafunny! Kagura is no joke--SEROUSLY hardcore! this was funny, man!
 Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 27, 2006 15:53 PST
Comment/Review:
…delightfully morbid… I think… well, keep up the good work, dark
 Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 27, 2006 15:52 PST
Comment/Review:
Should I be laughing, or should I feel sorry for Sesshoumaru? Keep up the good work, dark
 Title: ... killed who killed...
Reviewed By: 123heresur'view  On: September 29, 2006 18:17 PDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
so the police killed shippo who killed aiko who killed rin who killed kagura who killed sesshomaru who killed sierra who killed toga who killed inuyasha who killed kagome who killed nezumi who killed ryomaru who killed kichiro... wow thats a mouthful! lol great story!
 Title: Your Sick!
Reviewed By: Bellhopper21  On: August 27, 2006 19:10 PDT
Comment/Review:
Your truely sick in a good way I like I like very much though I had to say that the first chapter had me rushing to the toilet. By the way you owe me 5.99 for those panties Bellhopper here hoppin off!
 Reviewed By: gnomesarecomingtokillme  On: August 15, 2006 12:35 PDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Brilliant! I must say, that if everyone were still alive, they would all be on Jerry Springer. Lol! Keep up the good work! :D
 Reviewed By: nish04 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 13, 2006 09:19 PDT
Comment/Review:
LOL! well....that was quite entertaining... as twisted as that was....it just seemed so funny... hehe...thnx or the laughs...buh bye!
 Reviewed By: Christi (pionuschick)  On: August 12, 2006 22:44 PDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was awesome :D Glad it didn't *actually* happen, but it was pretty darn amusing!
 Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 12, 2006 19:35 PDT
Comment/Review:
Even though that April Fool's was meant to be a horror, but it was the funniest thing I've read in a while. Thanks for the laughs! ^_^
 Reviewed By: Anya [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 12, 2006 12:45 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
roflmao! A reminder of the sadistic mind of the greatest authoresses of fanfiction EVER! We love you Sueric! You are the famed name that keeps us reading fanfics!
 Reviewed By: Sayo124 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 14, 2006 03:07 PDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I decided to read this, as well, seeing how everything else is so enjoyable... I almost fell off my chair imagining Sesshoumaru groveling at Kagura's feet... LoL! In underpants, too... Ah, your humor does not cease to amaze me...
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