| "The Road Less Travelled By" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: review - up to chapter 16
Reviewed By: Niobe Jones [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 12:23 CDT
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This is a really great story. I really want to see more of it. I really hope you haven't abandoned it or decided to stop posting here because it is really good. I really liked the butterfly effect that you did with this and how things are expanding. It really is fun to read. I also really loved fights with Neji & Gaara, they were well done! I really hope to see more from you.
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Reviewed By: hercat On: February 05, 2007 14:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a lot of fun to read. I enjoyed the slow development of the changes, and would be interested in seeing where this goes.
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Reviewed By: Isadora The Great [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 11:04 CDT
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I like this story a lot! It's an intresting concept and you've got the characters pegged. The only problem is the format. It's kind of hard to read with all the paragraphs so close together. Otherwise, awesome, awesome story. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: SanadaSayuri [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 03:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG... You so totally left us hanging back there.... Please update again soon! You're doing very well so far! I can't wait to read more.
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Title: Don't stop!!
Reviewed By: Katterrena [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2006 03:22 CST
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You can't stop writing now!!! It's about to get really, really interesting. This has got to be the best peice of Naruto fanfiction out there!! You Can't stop!!
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Reviewed By: neosildrake [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 10:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Only 5 reviews so far? That's not enough for this ff. I think it's realy good, even if it sometimes goes a bit slow. And you might change the form a little bit. Leave a little bit more space in the story. A few breaks in the story would be great, so we don't have to read such a huge clusterd writing. (I'm not sute if I'm phrasing it right, since english isn't my native tongue.) I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Katterrena [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 14:18 CST
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Another excellent chapter! Please keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Honor [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 15:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Reall enjoying this fic. It's the first one I've seen to bring the teamwork in at this point rather than the Wave Country arc. I hope you update this soon. I really recommend it to readers for the insights into the characters' inner thoughts during the chuunin exams.
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Reviewed By: Honor [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 15:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really enjoying this fic so far. This is the first fic I've seen that attempts to tie the team work in here, rather than during the Wave Country arc. I hope you update this soon.
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Title: Please Continue!
Reviewed By: Katterrena [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2005 16:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a truly excellent story! I agree that Sasuke was essentially doomed from the beginning and I am very glad that you are writing a story that shows the Naruto story the way that it could have been if Sasuke had just loosened up a bit and allowed himself to be part of the group. I am also a fan of the poem that you used as inspiration for the story. Please continue with your story and don't give up!!!
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Title: ...huh?
Reviewed By: fei2 On: December 01, 2005 18:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay, like three of the chapters were for the wrong fic here... who's takuya, jeb and kouji? i thought this was a naruto fic...
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