| "Loving a Dog of the Military" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Title: :D
Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 01:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really cute story...but the ending is...just...gah! Its such a cliffhanger! I guess I'm off to read the sequel then. :/
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Title: sweet
Reviewed By: SSJKawaiiTenshi On: April 14, 2006 22:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
this was great!! ive never read a A/u of full metal alchemist, u should DEF write another story to wrap this up!
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Reviewed By: tinita [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 23:02 CDT
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FMA is one of my favorite shows...I so enjoy reading your writing!! You make my wishes come true with the characters and i just love it!! Thanks again.
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Title: Good Job
Reviewed By: arris On: January 31, 2006 20:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a real good story. I just wish there were more EdxWin couplings out there. I like how you went through the story line and how you put just enough sexuality in it to make it interesting but not enough to take away from the story line. I cant wait till the sequel comes out.
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Title: Great Story
Reviewed By: Crazy_FanGirl Jessie On: January 18, 2006 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a great story.It's good to finally find a Winry/Ed fic that is interesting.Well can't wate to see another fanfic from ya.
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Reviewed By: yamilover32 On: January 18, 2006 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just so you know, I also reviewed on Fanfiction.net, so that may be why you have seen my name before. Like I said in the other one, great story, & I bet the sequel's gonna be great too! Thanxs! :) :p ;)
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Title: sweet!
Reviewed By: XxxDaveySoSexy10 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2006 23:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really loved this story and can't wait for the sequel. i'm a straight guy, but still hopelessly romantic. winry is definately the perfect match for ed, and i can't wait to find out who u'll pair ed with. till the review, davey
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Reviewed By: angel-vamp2003 On: December 31, 2005 15:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good story!! I love how it all worked out, nad I cna;t wait for the sequel!!
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Title: oops
Reviewed By: lunar alchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 16:42 CST
Comment/Review:
Sorry, it's called, "Whisper in the Wind" not whisper OF the wind. Oh well, ya know what I mean. ~lunar alchemist~
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: lunar alchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 16:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I LOVED IT! Please hurry and write more! Pwetty pwetty please?! I want to see what Ed's kids are like. By the way, can you R&R my fic? It's called, "Whisper of the Wind" and it's rated T in the romance column. It would mean so much to me. Thanks!!! PULEEZ WRITE MORE TO YOUR FIC! ~lunar alchemist~
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Reviewed By: tahiri On: December 12, 2005 21:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my dear lord you can't leave us haning like that, please make a sequel even if it's like "Ed dissapeared now he returns years later to find the family he never knew he had" oh please let us get a hint of a happy ending
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Title: :)
Reviewed By: lucawindmover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2005 17:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, you left us hanging! But I love it anyway. And about the people hassling you about lemons, forget them. Only put them in when you feel comfortable with it and when it flows with the story. I think you have done a great job and I'm anxiously awaiting the sequel. Boy or girl? Grin, Jessica
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Sariyona [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2005 16:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:) It's so nice to finally find a Winry/Ed fic...they are so few. Enjoyed it and can't wait for the sequel !!!!
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Reviewed By: lucawindmover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 22:24 CST
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I love it! It is so great! I can't wait to see how it all pans out. I hope there aren't any enemies coming....
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Reviewed By: lucawindmover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 22:14 CST
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This is a great edit. I think the chapter flows so much better than it did. I can't wait to go on and read the next chapter. I love Ed and Winry pairings but it isn't something you find too often. And thanks for reading my story. I added a little part to the first chapter. It's sorta what you would read if it was on the back of a book. Anyway, chapter seven is up. Let me know what you think. Keep up the good writing. And I'll keep mine up too. As long as I have one person reading, it is worth the trouble. Thanks a bunch, Jessica
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