| "Disturbing Thoughts" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Incandescent On: October 06, 2006 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was not even disturbing, this was downright stupid. What are you, 12? Only a child would develop such an idea - have you even seen that done to women? It seems as if you're condoning it, since you mentioned "when" Sess does it, not "If" he were to do it. Disgusting. You should be ashamed.
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Reviewed By: Silver_Drache(not logged in) On: February 08, 2006 18:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ewwww OH GOD EWWWW NASTY EWWWWWWWWWW OH MY GOD GET OUT OF MY HEAD EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW OH MY...THAT IS JUST GROSS!!!! EWWWWWWW *shivers in complete disgust while mutering ewwww*
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Reviewed By: Ultimategamer982 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 20:13 CST
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i cant stop thinking about the evil image GOD DAMN U How could u have thought of something as disturbing as that and why would u put it on the internet thank god kids dont take sex ed till like 9thor 10th grade and where the hell did u find Bukkake do u google stuff like that...........holy crap
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Reviewed By: Az On: December 06, 2005 19:42 CST
Comment/Review:
okay, that may have well been the most disturbing thing anyone's ever written, you have a seriously twisted mind, funny though ^_^
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Reviewed By: Ultimategamer982 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 17:50 CST
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.................................................................WHAT THE HELL im gonna have nightmares for WEEKS all because u had to write a story about how kagome is curious about Seshshomaru...... doing things that should not be imagined by anyone! And i have a Regents practice Tomarrow how am i supposed to concentrate with the image of seshshomaru wacking the weasle funny story though and type more of them BAD IMAGE VERY BAD IMAGE
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Reviewed By: Inu4Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 11:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was just hilarious!!! I laughed until I almost fell out of my chair!! I will have to see if you have other works posted...That was just great!!
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Reviewed By: Inuguy(DH) On: December 05, 2005 03:55 CST
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Reviewed By: Shrikant [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 23:35 CST
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Oh gods, that was just ... You know you are right, you ARE going to hell for that :lol: Any more disturbing thought yet to be put on paper?
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