| Title: Good job!|
Reviewed By: Ryuuzaki Kusakurin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 13:47 CST
Style of Writing: 9 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
It's a great read, though it'd be cool if you wrote a sequel lol. Anyway, I hope you don't mind me using your 'bridge scene' in my own GitS fanfic, I'll give you credit of course. *laughs* I just think it fits Togusa down to a T, you know what I mean? I needed an idea like that for my fic [basically it's what happens to Togusa after a near-fatal injury, his wife finally says that she's leaving, he never sees his kids again, and so Batou takes him in, all the while grumbling about humans being breakable - though eventually he'll show a bit more care towards him], so I hope you don't mind, please tell me if you do!