| "Fuyu Yume" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shikon-Tenshi-Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2009 04:12 CDT
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*gasp* how could that-that-MONSTER do that to her!?!?! Sorry over-reacting anyway PLEASE update SOON it is SO GOOD! And I vote for Kurama/Kagome/Touya
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2008 18:33 CDT
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this is a good story so far, i hope you update it soon
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Title: i love it!!!
Reviewed By: miko_onna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i personally love it i think it is a great fic tht stemmed 4m a great idea. lol i love the plot behind it. even if ur facts r a lil muddled*_* lol but 1 thing i dont rele understand is this--is the girl tht fell threw the well the kagome *we* no--or is the it the winter princess the kagome we all no??? im so lost or is it suppose to b bothO_O lol well ne ways its a great fic. i think the concept bhind itis the thing tht makes the story the best. hehe oh and i think it should b either hiei/kagome or touya/kagome. lol but my 1st choice would b hiei/ kagome. love~!!!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 11:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good work. I liked it. Keep it up and update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: MarieC On: June 29, 2007 07:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
plz continue
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 23:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice very nice please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: June 28, 2007 22:52 CDT
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Please update ASAP. Wonder how the group would react, when they find out that they have been followed and didn't notice it. Toya/Kagome/Kurama/Hiei
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Reviewed By: Destiny Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 21:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like all of the chapters so far!!! They're all really interesting. Please Update Soon!!!!
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Title: Chapter 5(6)
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. Update soon. Pairings since Kagome is the daughter of Jack Frost any of the ones with ice in them would work. Especailly Hiei since he is fire and ice.
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Reviewed By: Yue-Gongzhu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 20:13 CST
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so cool! could you make a Kurama/Kagome/Touya please? thanks!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 15:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Anonymousfanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 15:39 CST
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Yusuke better be nice, if they want a favor from her. Please update ASAP Kurama/Kagome/Touya
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 09:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very intriguing! I like this plot and the way you are letting us in on Kagome's story. It's been a while since you've updated -- please write more!
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Title: Chapter 4(5)
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 06:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Update soon. Pairings Hiei/Kagome since Hiei has both fire and ice in him. Even if need be do an alternative pairing with Touya and Kagome since Touya is also ice.
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Title: fred@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: Fred1 On: May 13, 2006 08:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perhaps you should check out http://www.freedict.com/onldict/jap.html. Yuki-onna does not translate into Snow Goddess. It means Snow Woman. Using Japanese terms is fine, but make sure you have the right translation if you are going to use them.
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