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| "FAKE In Love: Act XV, Fires and Distance" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] | Reviewed By: Insert_Pseudonym [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2013 17:46 EDT
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Nyah! That was a mean cliffhanger! Meanie, meanie, meanie! Thank God the next Act is all done and waiting for me :D I think Rose and Jamie would make a cute couple. I never thought about them like that, but now that I do... Damn! ;D And man, there are many explosions in this one! Just as Ryo wanted to kiss Dee, too! Grr! Besides, I wonder if Dee will ever manage to kiss Ryo with his glasses still on? Who knows, who knows... Well apart from that, nice Act as always, I especially like the quite dramatic "ending". And now I'm off to the next one because DAMN I want to know what's going to happen next! Oh and I don't know if I said this before, but you have amazing ideas for your stories. Really! They are super creative and different from most of the other fanfiction out there! :) | Reviewed By: Natasha Kane On: April 11, 2006 11:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've just started reading your storyline and I'm in love with them! I've read just about all of them in just one week. You've got me hooked on them. I just can't get enough. I really look forward to reading more of the stories!
| Title: Amazing - Yet Again
Reviewed By: BlueSimplicity [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 21:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Grumpy Demon - It's been a while since you last posted something, and even longer since you posted something in your original FAKE IN LOVE timeline, but oh, oh, oh, was this so worth the wait. I don't know how, but 15 acts into this, and your stories are even more engrossing than they ever were. With each act, you reveal more things about our favourite boys, but, even more importantly, more things about your skill as a writer. The subtle emotional realizations, the playful dialogue that reveals so much about how the characters feel about each other, the interesting dynamics the relationships you have developed have created - It all makes for fascinating, engrossing reading. And the sudden direction you took this act in the end left me simultaneously heartbroken and breathless. Nobody does FAKE like you do, and there is no other writer out there whose stories I so eagerly anticipate. And then you decide to kill us with the cliffhanger. AAARGH. Please, please, please - update soon. The wait is KILLING me!
| Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 17:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the fic as always. The cliffhanger was unexpected. I hpoe that you will post the next act sooner rather than later. Cya
| Reviewed By: Pilgrim [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 13:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I only signed up to mediaminer so i could review your fics! and can i firstly say amazing you are extremely talented! Anyway....where was i...oh yes...A CLIFFHANGER?!?! NOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooo!!!! Omg u have to update faster than you did this time...oh please i beg u!!!! Again wonderfully written and Dee rules as a hitman lol!! pilgrim
| Title: GREAT!
Reviewed By: Xo Shu Mhing [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2005 23:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well worth the wait! You capture all the Fake gang in the best way. I laughed a number of times in this one, a giggle is always good now and then. I love how you handle Bicky & Dee, just how they should be! As for AU fic it was awesome, I too would like to see what happens next, but I think all stories should flow and be forced. Your stories show alot of heart keep it up. Oh, of course I love those lemons.
| Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: Is O Eirinn Me [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 20:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!....First let me say; "DAMMIT I HATE CLIFFHANGERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" I loved your newest post it is the best. I get so excited when i find out that you have put up a new post. I canceled my plans for the night so i could stay home and read this new Act. Please get the next one up as soon as possible I dont think I cant wait long...And as for the people who gave you hell about your AU...I thought it was the best. I loved reading about Dee and Ryo falling in love again, i really hope you post a sequal to it, if not for you then for me i would love to see what would happen next...
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