| "Tenchi Muyo! ½ plus Alpha (Original)" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Bradw316 On: August 21, 2002 01:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story overall, was good and the fact that Ryu/Chun Li coupling is a plus, I liked it, but need two make more chapters and make them a little bit more detailed. |
Reviewed By: Andrew Logeot On: June 06, 2002 12:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am unable to get to my email so I will write to you this way.
Sho future in my fanfic, Mortal Kombat: M.U.G.E.N is coming along nicely. I will try to send you a copy before release. I don't want to give away too much but Sho's role has become more important and now will have a huge effect with Samuel. Sho will have a new form due to a mutation by confusion of his senses. It will have the same effect as his Dragon morphing but this is a one-timer.
Gotta go. See ya in the end of August.
[I would put something here but your readers might see something I don't want them to.] |
Reviewed By: Sonic On: April 12, 2002 08:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Slow down and add more details in this chapter, you are going way to fast... also check the differences between your and you're... they are important ;-) |
