| "A Little Short of Jelousy" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: anime_lover_kohaku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2006 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good story i really want to know what ginji and shido are planning or doing or w/e. YOU SHOULD REALLY REALLY UPDATE!!! you are driving me nuts i want to know what will happen, so please UPDATE
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Reviewed By: KidAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 13:23 CST
Comment/Review:
You should totally type the next chapter ^^; This is really well written, and I would definately read continuated chapters.
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Reviewed By: muzikyin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2006 01:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i thought it was pretty kool i relly wanna noe what shido n ginji were doing.... they were either doing 'it' (^_^) or planning some'em for ban hehehe can't wait to read the next chapter good work la~
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Title: Mur
Reviewed By: CaideSin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 12:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I actually kind of liked it. I wasn't really expecting to...but you actually have a pretty good grasp of the characters. And you can spell! I think my only advice would be, Ban wouldn't blush ~_^ and you don't...have to write...how you think it should go. If you know what I mean? 'It seemed like the thing to do' you don't HAVE to. You're the author do it how you want it done. You have such a great grasp on the characters, that I really think you could make this totally amazing. I'll be watching!
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