| "The Hidden Past, The Hopeful Future" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Title: close
Reviewed By: Zircrubyon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 16:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay.....so maybe i should just put overall rating of 10.hehehe....well, u got maya near the point.but, its close enough for me!in the manga her hair is shorter, but u can keep it like that.it probably grew since now theyre in high school, so dont change it.i loved this chapter!especially the part about the fan girls.hehehehe.......update soon[i'm saying that to myself].to u, i say:update as soon as you can.^.^
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Title: awsome
Reviewed By: hackneyqueenextreme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 14:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh please, you just have to update soon. I absolutely love it. It sounds a lot like my school, including the fan girls. I wish I could live in this story. I actually think that I could fit in perfectly. Now isn't that a laugh.
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Reviewed By: Zircrubyon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2006 17:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS A-M-A-Z-I-N-G-L-Y........SHORT!LOL!KIDDING!hehehe...IT WAS AWESOME!WHOOP!I LOVE YOUR STORY!not enough to marry it, BUT STILL!THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!
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Reviewed By: tsuki-tora (not logged in) On: January 19, 2006 19:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon!^_~
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Title: maya
Reviewed By: shuillin[Zircrubyon] On: January 18, 2006 17:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooo...do u mean the maya kitajima that was the closest girl to dating kurama??? oh uh...it was either black hair or dark brown hair...uhm...she has innocent [enough, as in, not babyish] dark brown eyes and she has a bit of a sixth sense. those are things i'm mostly possitive about.well, she definetely has the sixth sense!i read the manga ^.^...hehehe....but manga didnt have color, so i went to sum sights and sum of them sed black hair, dark brown hair, wats the diff??? usually dark brown hair looks black, so take your pick.hehe.hope that helps.[oh, and i'm not sure if she still likes kurama cuz wen maya was attacked and kurama was taking her home{after defeating the demon, Eight Hands, ofcourse}he erased her memories of her having feelings for him]. so yeah.just to help you on ur story.
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Reviewed By: shuillin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2006 18:42 CST
Comment/Review:
btw, i'm Zircrubyon.wenever i wanna review, it logs me out damnit...
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Title: oh shitnage
Reviewed By: shuillin On: January 13, 2006 18:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh!it was ur bday b4?shnap uh....happy bday!lolgreat chapter!it was so cool and funni!please update as soon as you can pwease!
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Reviewed By: Tsuki-tora (not logged in) On: January 10, 2006 22:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update asap! And thank you for updating so soon. By the way Happy Birthday! Even though i am three days late... ^_^*
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Zircrubyon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 20:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...i reviewed the most....I'M SO HAPPY!FOR ME AND FOR YOU!!!keep writing.^^...agen!lol
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Title: THANK YOU
Reviewed By: Zircrubyon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!!!oh, and THANK YOU FOR LISTENING WHEN I EMAILED U TO UPDATE!!!MUCH APPRECIATION!update as soon as you can pwease!yay!!!!hehehe...
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Title: SHYET!
Reviewed By: Zircrubyon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2006 22:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVE the story so far!PLEASE update ASAP!!!
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Reviewed By: tsuki-tora (not logged in) On: December 29, 2005 17:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how the plot is going so far. I caant wait to see Kena's reaction to Youko being Shuichi! Update asap!
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Title: Nikki
Reviewed By: sweetmangos [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 16:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story and hated it when it came to an end. I hope you update more, I can't wait to see what your come up with next. Good luck.
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Reviewed By: tsuki-tora (not logged in) On: December 25, 2005 16:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon! Cant wait toseee the next chapter. ^_~
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 16:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this story please update soon
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