| Reviewed By: darkokita [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2008 21:59 CST|
Style of Writing: 8 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
First person doesn't bother me as it does some others. In fact, if it's done well (and yours is) it's absolutely wonderful. Hence the high scores. Your spelling and grammar are great too. I'm a PMK fan (Souji whore) and while I've read lots of RK fanfics, I haven't seen the anime yet so I'll assume that the difficulty I had following in a couple of places was probably due to my ignorance more than your writing style. (It only happened in a couple places that weren't related to what I saw in PMK. That part I followed fine.) I did like that it was dark and brooding, as it should be given the contents. Over all, I enjoyed it very much and am looking forward to the next chapters. Please don't wait too long.