| "His Heart & The Only One Who Can Save Him" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: 2
Reviewed By: jamez On: January 19, 2006 22:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awesome ive read it like a million times but anyway it was great cant w8 4 the nxt 1
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Title: ummm
Reviewed By: unknownanimefan On: January 01, 2006 13:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey not to be a drag or anything but maybe u shouldnt have it bold and by the 5th chapter when u had it underlined and bold I stopped reading. Not a lot of people can read bold and u should do pragraphs okay. It will be a lot easier for the people to read. It is a good story just out helping writers so their stories can be the best ^__^
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: December 20, 2005 12:29 CST
Comment/Review:
Not bad. Of course I'm only on chapter 2. By the way, it's the "FEUDAL" era, not the "fuddle" era.
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Reviewed By: ceci-chan On: December 14, 2005 20:06 CST
Comment/Review:
your ch.2 section is perfect, except for the few misspelled words like conchous, it concious, but other than that it was good.
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