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| "Never Gamble..." Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 01:01 CDT
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That was great, just great and since I cannot think of anything else to say, that was great =)
| Title: I knew it! =P
Reviewed By: Child Xylia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 22:50 CDT
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As soon as everyone started to hed for the tavern I knew Ed was gonna get the girl. =D The carded line that Ed says made me laugh, too.
| Reviewed By: Haywire_Hakaze [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 11:52 CDT
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"Go Ed, it's your birthday-- not for real-real! Just for play-play!" Uhm, well I guess it WAS for real-real in this fic, eh? *chuckle* That was very cute. I think you pulled off their characters very well and it'd be nice to see more one-shots from you. I will be reading your other fanfics once I find the time, so beware! ^_^
| Reviewed By: Fullmetal_Alchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 09:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, im not a big fan of one shot stories, but this one i absolutely loved. Ive been reading all your stories, and i absolutely adore your style of writing.
| Title: LOL!!
Reviewed By: dragonnan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2005 02:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome!!!! Till the end, I thought he was betting on Mustang- which was your intent!! That was a delightful short story (oh sheesh, sorry- no pun intended, I'M SORRY EDWARD!!!!) Heheh... Anyhow, very fun to read, and I love the reactions of the characters! I'd love to see a drunken Ed someday, that would be hilarious!!!!
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