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"Haunting love" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ]
 Reviewed By: Zelda Dee [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 02, 2008 17:19 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Its been a year but hopefully you'll update sooner, I really want to know what Darien did to Serena and Rini. =^_^=
 Reviewed By: sailor_jupiter22 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 31, 2008 10:14 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
oh man that was great. what in the world did he do to her? i hope its not something bad or something that will hurt serena and rini.
 Reviewed By: PrincessoftheMoon [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 17, 2008 13:29 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You are doing really well so far. Unfortunately I don't have any ideas. This is a great story. Hope you can update soon!!!!
 Title: awesome again
Reviewed By: sailor_jupiter22 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 11, 2007 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
cant wait to read the next chapter(s) that you post. keep up the good work
 Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: GothPunker [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 01, 2007 07:28 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is one of the best ghost stories i have ever read. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!
 Title: KOOL
Reviewed By: sailor_jupiter22 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 06, 2007 18:51 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
can't wait to read an update again. keep up the good work/
 Reviewed By: animegirl25 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 30, 2007 17:22 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Love the story. Great theme. Please update soon.
 Title: KOOL
Reviewed By: sailor_jupiter22 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 21, 2007 11:40 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
it gets even better as it goes. i cant wait to see how serena responded when she heard him talk to her!
 Title: sorry
Reviewed By: rockieboo [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 21, 2007 11:07 CST
Comment/Review:
sorry about the chps being so short i will try to make the next ones longer, i glad u like the story please keep reviewing
 Title: =^_^=
Reviewed By: Zelda Dee [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 21, 2007 02:59 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really like this story, I wish you could update sooner and make the chapters longer. But keep up the good work.
 Title: AHH to short
Reviewed By: DarkMe [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 21, 2007 00:01 CST
Comment/Review:
I like the story, but like others are saying its too short. Can't wait to see how you're going to make Darian in this, his just claiming Serena and Rini has the potential to be frightening. Update soon
 Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Zelda Dee [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 03, 2007 18:13 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh I need more please. Hurry up and put up another chapter please. ^_^
 Title: good
Reviewed By: sailor_jupiter22 [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 04, 2006 18:24 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
cant wait to read more hope you update soon.
 Reviewed By: JPandS [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 19, 2006 15:06 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Your style of writing is very good but it's too short! What you have written so far is very good, it's just that there are some slight grammar and spelling mistakes like "...neater a wife or children." I think you meant neither but typos are very common so it's just a matter of revising and looking it over. It also seemed like there were a few small words missing in some parts of the story like "..No ever stayed long..." or something like that but again that's just a minor mistake that i make all the time too... Other then that, the story is really really good and I enjoyed it a lot. Poor Darien! It's too bad that he died so young...I can't wait to see what the next chapters will bring! Good job so far and I hope you keep up the good work! Bye!

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