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"betrayel" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ]
 Title: PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Normal_Girl41  On: January 20, 2007 00:24 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This story is so cool and awsome.PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 Title: betryal
Reviewed By: Nessa Lynn  On: December 05, 2006 15:19 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think this is a great story.Please update soon.
 Reviewed By: tifa-luvers-cloud  On: August 26, 2006 00:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
im liking this fanfic!so plz update soon.... and i hope this is a sasuke/kagome story!
 Title: good
Reviewed By: Lang/wolf  On: July 24, 2006 11:56 CDT
Rating(s):
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think it was a good first start and a good i dea to keep her late friends weapons and you left some very good clues as what happened to sango and miroku
 Reviewed By: Nami_wave_101 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 06, 2006 19:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
***SCREAMS*** I HATE HATE HATE HATE CLIFFHANGERS!!!! SO PLEASE ADD MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: 2HOT4U  On: June 05, 2006 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
i like it keep writing! update soon! ^^
 Reviewed By: Hieiluver05 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 13, 2006 21:01 CST
Comment/Review:
I like Naruto/Inuyasha crossover stories especailly is if it's about Kagome. I'm hoping that the pairings for this story is Sasuke and Kagome
 Reviewed By: lilcar12 [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 28, 2005 22:49 CST
Comment/Review:
HEHE!~! me againz!~!! i just wanted to tell you that if there aint any permanent pairings i want kags to go with itachi!~!! yahoo!! update soon 'cuz i've been waiting for like...14 dayz. lol ^-^
 Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko  On: December 19, 2005 12:55 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is getting really good. You should update this soon. And I hope you do. I'm also hoping that this is a Kakashi/Kagome pairing. Or at least a Kagome/Sasuke pairing. I doen't matter to me, as long it's not with Gaara, Gai-sensei, anybody else who's weird looking or acts funny.
 Reviewed By: Devilangel620 [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 17, 2005 12:10 CST
Comment/Review:
woohoo!another Naruto/IY crossover. These are the best!I hope that someone,preferably Sasuke or Kakashi or Itachi,fall in love with her. Pleez update soon.
 Title: ^^
Reviewed By: animewolfgurl [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 16, 2005 20:30 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this is really good so far. update soon
 Reviewed By: Talakurama [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 16, 2005 09:30 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow! it is awesome. Please update it soon. I really enjoy it a lot. Please finish your story, most of the stories that I've read aren't finished, I don't know why, but maybe they had writers block. Well please finish it. So far I'm really enjoying it. It is very good, and it is wonderful. Well Bye. Talakurama
 Reviewed By: Ms. anonymous  On: December 15, 2005 15:12 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Could you please explain, at least in the author's note, how she went from being the schoolgirl we all know to having Sango's and Miroku's weapons?
 Reviewed By: Animeotakubara [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 15, 2005 06:16 CST
Comment/Review:
Please update soon
 Reviewed By: lilcar12 [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 14, 2005 22:52 CST
Comment/Review:
i like naruto/inuyasha x-over they r cool!! i like ur story so far and i hope u update soon!~! ^-^

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