Title: FFARG
Reviewed By: Dee-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 20:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Ah. It's hard for me to write an unbiased review for your work, as I'll probably always have a natural inclination for your short stories--mostly, because you know what you're doing. Your stories--"To Forget" included--always seem to pull the appropriate emotional strings, never lame or cheese, just...right and believable, even the happy ending was convincing. Also, spelling and grammar wise I didn't see any errors. I bet there weren't any :-). Overall, "To Forgot" was a job very well done. You should be proud of yourself. Happy Holidays and thank you very much for submitting to FFARG. --Dee
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