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| "Hey" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: sohmamomiji [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 22:53 CST
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Nice! That was utterly sweet! There are so few stories out there that cover there Gonou/Gojyo time period. (With the mention of "unfinished business" - I sort of assumed that this is pre-Hakkai.)
| Title: Aaaaaawwwww!!!
Reviewed By: Akita & Subu-chan On: January 21, 2006 23:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey-ho! Akita is back! (From having her stomach pumped) Shut up, Subu-chan! I'm back and almost decongestant free. What a sweet fic! It's so hard to find good H&G fics out there. Most everybody wants to write about the monk&monkey! Ooh, I made a funny! (Sit down and shut up! He's a preist, not a monk.) Same difference! (Don't make me have to hit you again. I swear I have to hide the cold medicine around here when you get sick! Back to the subject, this was a well written fic with all the right characterizations. A very good story and sweet without being sappy enough to make Akita here gag.) Yay! Subu-chan likes it too! One request pweeease? More LEMON! Yummies! (Yes, that's nice Akita, now go to bed. You need to sleep off the overdose.) Aaw! Don't wanna!
| Reviewed By: sparticus_sun On: January 21, 2006 21:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love reading Gojyo/Hakkai, but I can't ever seem to find enough good fics out there. But this one is so absolutely sweet and enjoyable. The style, the pace you set, the overall tone of the whole piece...it's just wonderful. Neither Gojyo or Hakkai seem out of character. The situation you wrote seems very plausible, and I could definitely see this happening. (It'd be even better if this truly did happen in the manga/anime, huh? :P) So, anyways, just thought I'd let you know that I really liked your story. Later!
| Title: Dharmaserenity1
Reviewed By: dharmaserenity [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 23:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story. It is very sweet and the tension between the two of them nearly palpable. The way that Gojyo would look at Hakkai just once before he would ignore him every time was a very nice touch that said so much. Love the ending -- ahh, that Gojyo! What a dog! :)
| Reviewed By: yukitok On: December 20, 2005 22:07 CST
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I know it's a generic comment, but this is very good...fluffy with out being non-realistic. I like it! exceptional job.
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