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| "East Side, West Side" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Title: Sequel!?!
Reviewed By: Tohru819 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hooray! I'm SOO glad you're doing a sequel! ^_^ I love this story and that last chapter would have been the worst ending ever! Poor Kassie is SOO sad. But it looks like Shii-chan and Saa-chan (Sachiko) have a secret plan to make her happy again, are they going to visit her America? Saa-chan is such a great character, she's kinda like Shii-chan but different. Did you know that Sachiko means 'Child of bliss' I think that is a wonderful name for Saa-chan, do you? The part at the airport was SO sad (I almost cried) but SOO sweet too, Kyon-chan makes a great older brother. I'm glad that he finally told Kassie that he loves her, I think she needed to hear that. Now I'm off to go read the sequel! I'm so excited!
| Title: Only one chapter left!?
Reviewed By: Tohru819 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, and to think that I only wrote three reviews so far, I usually write more reviews than that for FF.net because I like their review writing system thingy better than the one they have here. Dangit! I thought I had put this fic in my favorites! Well, I'm sure that I did this time so I'll know next time it's updated. I can't wait for the end but I will miss the Okurimonos and Kasumi, that's is the worst part about OCs, (OC stands for original character or something like that, right? I really have no idea but that's my best guess) They grow on you and then you miss them when the fic ends. So all the Okurimonos have health problems and stuff, that explains what was wrong with Kandi-kane. I thought that whole thing about Hinako's twin being Sachiko's daughter was pretty weird, but still cool. I think that's pretty clever, every one of the Okurimonos have an interesting background story. P.S. Kyon-chan makes such a kawaii older brother! ^_^
| Title: Hooray! New chapter!
Reviewed By: Tohru819 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 14:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw, is Kandi-kane okay? I wonder what's wrong with her? I hope that she does get with Kyon-chan, I think they'd make SUCH a cute couple! Thanks for answering my question about there being any future pairings and stuff. Kasumi and Kippei will also make a very good couple. ^_^ I can't wait for the next chapter! I've gotta put you in my favorite author list so I'll know next time you update!
| Reviewed By: Tohru819 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 01:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What great story. I don't know how you came up with it but it's reeeeally good. And original. I love Sachiko, she's so funny. How old is she supossed to be? When I think of her, for some reason I think of the old lady from My Neighbor Totoro. I don't now why Sachiko reminds me of her but she does. I also love Kasumi, she annoys the heck outa my poor Kyon-chan but that's what I love about her! PLEEEEEEASE update SOOOOOON! I can't wait for the next chapter, I want to find out more about the Okurimonos. And will there be any future pairings I wonder?
| Title: this is great
Reviewed By: lonelystar On: May 16, 2006 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the only reason i put and 8 on spelling and grammer is cause 1. u spelled kyo's name wrong or i think so 2. somethings didn't make a lot of sence like in chapter 7 when kokoro says "Because you don't want you and we're just all looking out to do anything that will annoy you and be against your will." to ariel other wise great i loved it and i'm waiting for the next chapter to come out ^^
| Reviewed By: Tetsunosuke_Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 11:57 CST
Comment/Review:
Uwaa, i like this, it's a little like mine ne? Keep going, i really want to read more
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