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| "Break Me" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: JennyChick [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2006 22:45 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm a little writing my review (once again) but then again, better late then never right?^^ I'm still liking what you've got going and I hope you'll continue. I really want to see how these two will react to their situations.^^ I hope you'll write more and I hope you have fun with your manga script!
| Reviewed By: JennyChick [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 18:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Hi!^^ I finally got time to review your story! I find it very interesting and I can't wait to see where you are going with it. I think you are doing pretty well charaterization wise, the only thing is that I think Hawkeye could be a little more authoritative. In the first chapter she seemed fine, but in the second she seemed a little more lax. But then again that could just be me.^^; I can't wait for chapter 3! Good job!
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