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| "Rule the Game" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: HelLoki'sDaughter On: July 20, 2006 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this fic, but it seemed to have ended abruptly, i was surprised to learn that it actually was over. But overall, it was great ^_^
| Reviewed By: Vamp468 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 19:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
This fic was not crap. I liked the ending, cheesy-sap or not. Aleast Joey didn't end up a depressed and lonely cutter, bleeding to death on his bathroom floor! ^_^ That probably wasn't helpful, but the point is this was good. It's a shame that you lost intrest, but there's not really a helluva lot that can be done about that. So buck up and just one more time for reassurence (I think I mutilated the spelling of that word); This was not crap. ^_^
| Reviewed By: Mala Darkling [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 13:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Nice. I love your sense of humor, and I'm totally looking forward to the next installment. You did a good job catching attention, and now I really want to know what happens...lol. Just one tiny editing (here I go again): "with perhaps more force was entirely warranted" should it be "than was entirely warranted"? It just sticks out since everything else seems perfect. !_!
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