Reviewed By: Jefcat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2003 15:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought this was developing nicely when you ended it so abruptly. Too bad too because I liked the way you had Sou and Misao interacting. I might suggest that you avoid using skills like Sou's shukuchi as a verb... |
