| "Disaster or Destiny?" Reviews/Comments [ 108 ] |
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Title: hey its misty!
Reviewed By: yingst [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i don't think i ever reviewed your fanfic, hmmm well i'm sure you already know i love it! well just wanted to let you know that i'm hard at work with chapter 4 of the manga, i got a photoshop too so its looking alot better, and i'm learning new tricks from other artist on da. wish you luck with the sequal to this story and and the vampire novel your working one. you can send me more chapters of it if you want, i would love to read it! bye for now!
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 22:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok, so I was going through the old posts and am very glad I did. Your story was great, and I am very depressed from it at the moment, but it was well worth it. I am going on to the sequel now and will leave another review there.
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Reviewed By: Mian On: June 20, 2006 07:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. You gave me a lot of ideas for my own fic (about Mian, Riza's little sister, falling in love with Ed and Finding out what happened to the pack of wolves she was raised by who were supposedly killed in a forest fire) Do you think you could fit in a sequel? (Mian is going to die in mine and then the story switches to Ed moving on)yeah, my nick is the name of my main character. B-U-T-ful story and I hope you write more.
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Reviewed By: carpadiem [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 19:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I lurve your story but I haven't had a chance to read it for a while and I just noticed that you changed the self insertion and put the girls name in. This is just my personal opinion and I mean no harm, but I liked it better when we didn't know her name so I could put my own in :) I'm sure it won't take away from the story I'm just voicing something I noticed. Anyways keep up the good work you are an amazing writer and I love your story :)
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Reviewed By: SnakeCharmerFoxx [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 23:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic!! It is extremely well written and everyone seems to be in character......great work!!!
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Reviewed By: Daughter of Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 22:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! I love your fan fic. But did you have to kill her. And what about Ed. That must of hurt. Don't worry I still love it. But PLEASE are you making a sequel. You can't end it that way. Even though it was a good ending. Is Marie going to come back? What about Ed and Al? Oh well, if you do put up a sequel, I will read it every time you update. Still think you fic is great.
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Reviewed By: Areai On: April 04, 2006 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story, please tell me that you are writing a sequel? please! This story was too good to leave it at that. I mean poor Ed, he's going to be an emotional wreck now *begs on her knees* Please!!!
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Title: I have no title
Reviewed By: yamikitsune1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 14:48 CDT
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How...how could you end like that,why why why >.< I mean personally I do love the ending,its just the dying & being seprated from Ed thats tearing my heart into threads. As soon I read the ending I have mixed emotions saddness,anger,confusion,happiness....I was just kinda sorta picturing the ending to be less angst to be honest. But that doesn't mean I still don't love your fan fiction! No way I'm still your fan ^_^ if you do choose to write more I'll be right here checking for updates everday as always ^__^ From your F.M.A F.F fan, Ta-chan *Tasha*
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Reviewed By: RFox On: April 03, 2006 14:42 CDT
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I don't mind the name Marie. ^_^ I just got a little confused I read that all your chapters were updated recently. Now I know why. You simply added a name and corrected the grammer and spelling erros. ^_^ Nice. However, I am sad to see Marie die. I wouldn't want Ed to seek revenge either. Despite the fact that Shane probably does need to be hunted down and.....-zips her lips- That's just a bit grotesque. I cried when Marie died. That was so sad. It's a shame that "I" had to die. Oh, and might I just say, this is one of the best FMA stories I've ever read so far. ^_^ I'm simply in love with it.
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Title: WTF
Reviewed By: Shadow wolf727 On: April 02, 2006 11:47 CDT
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whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa WHOA!! w-what happened who the HELL-o kitty is Marie?? & what happened to the last chap. I'm..I'm so confused...does this mean your gonna change the ending too...-_-; like I said I'm confused but never the less I still do loooove your F.F
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Title: Why?
Reviewed By: Black_wolf10 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2006 17:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh...My....God! What happened!!! Why did you have to end it there!?!?!? Are you going to make a sequel???? Are you gonna' continue with another story?????? PLEASE?!?!?! Please think about it!!!! I really loved this story, I never wanted it to end! It was so good that I thought that every time I was reading it, I just kinda zoned out and I thought that it was all a dream, but I have the proof sitting in my lap (yes I printed out every single chapter, and I read it over and over again)! I just can't stop reading it, and I don't want it to be over! I always check my email every morning and night thinking that you are going to update, but I remember that you ended it... It's sooooo sad. But it was a TOTALY AWESOME STORY!!! I'm so not lying when I say that you are the best author to the best story ever!!!!!!!!!! This story is better than any I have ever read on Fanfiction.net or any other site! I hate to say this, I mean really hate to say it, but it was a good ending (the ending is the part I hate to say). Thanks for the greatest story ever!
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Title: *sniff sniff*
Reviewed By: AcidGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2006 19:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NUUUUUUUU!!! I promised myself not to cry!! I PROMISED!!! This is the BEST fanfic I've ever read! But why did she have to die!?!?!? If it were possible, you could make a sequel out of it couldn't you? *sniff* hold on I'm still crying... *silent pause* *sigh* Okay, I'm done. What an overwhelming story! I never thought ANY fanfic would make me so sad as to cry. And I look forward to reading more of your stories! Thank you for making such a wonderful, funny, exciting, sad, heart pounding, hand sweating, eye widening, mouth gaping, adventurous and romantic story! T.T Your the best!!!
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Reviewed By: Kitani [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2006 13:55 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww!!! You ended it there? *sigh* That was really sad. The girl died after all that. Really, though, I think this was a really good story. If you're going to write anymore, I'll be sure to catch them!
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Title: Very sad ending....
Reviewed By: AngelOfTheRain On: March 30, 2006 00:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was a pretty sad ending, and you even killed me!!! (In the story, of course!) But overall, I'm sad because this awfully great story has ended (sigh) I hope you make more FMA stories soon!!!
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Title: TT TT
Reviewed By: Riks On: March 29, 2006 21:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh...my...God... You killed me... I can't believe you... Do you like torturing Edward?? The poor man! He's already suffered so much... TT TT -sighs- Really, was such a good fic. I'm just sad it ended like this. Poor, poor Edward...
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