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| "Wintersday" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Sisseh On: April 22, 2006 01:11 CDT
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That was a good story, on the whole it faiiiiirrrly easy to understand and it kept meh interested more or less the whole way through. More explanation on the world and things could have been used but they weren't really nessicary, good work. *Lick* There wasn't much reasoning behind the motive of what they were doing or the pasts. ~Sisi,
| Reviewed By: devildice708 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very nice one-shot with a rather sad ending, BV. I liked how you made the whole story fit into this one-shot. I kind of wondered what happened to Atia after she left the village, but as always, one-shots always seem to leave something unanswered. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this.
| Title: FFRG Review
Reviewed By: Pahhur [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 21:34 CST
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For starters, it was really well written, with no visible grammar mistakes. The plot was well constructed, and the characters were belivable. The use of magic was interesting. I do know there was a word limit to this, but now that it is done, the ending probably should be extended to make it feel more like an ending. At the end there was little to no feelings exhibited, where as at the start you had a proportionatly larger amount of emotional conflict going on between these two.
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