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Reviewed By: cathlene On: January 03, 2006 21:32 CST
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it's very very cool!(note:eloisa only forced me to give her a review and guess what ...i haven't even read her story!!!!!!!!
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Title: that's good!!!
Reviewed By: radhika_best [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 04:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
u can put jealousy scenes too. like make someone else dare someone else to kiss sakura ( that also in front of sasuke) and it makes sasuke jealous. he! he! he! that was a lame suggestion , eloisa. well.....update this fic as well as the new student 'cause i'm much more eager on reading that fic.
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Reviewed By: qt_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 04:13 CST
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hi guys! Hope you enjoyed my fic. Please review if you have read this. I want to hear ur comments, suggestions and everything. Well that's it! Hope you enjoyed it! Ja! ;p
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Title: The Sleepover
Reviewed By: ranalover515@yahoo.com On: December 29, 2005 23:48 CST
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Soooooooooooooooooooo great! PLEASE write more! Please Please I want to see what happens when sasuke-kun sleeps with sakura-chan later ooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnn!!!! OH! Next make Shino dare sasuke and sakura KISS(and I'm not talking about any kiss,I mean with their tounges together!!!)and you could either make them do the kiss in front of everybody or make them do it in the closet!!!! PLEASE I'm DYING TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!! THANK YOU!!
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Reviewed By: bananagurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 13:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your idea ... but if you made it into a story with sentence structure, there would probably a lot more words. And a lot more words = longer chapters = more people reading = more visits = popular. In my eyes, anyways. Keep up the good work! ~Banana Gurl
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