| "Niomie - Goten's Twin Sister" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: gohans love
Reviewed By: gglil On: August 16, 2011 15:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
like it |
Title: one thing
Reviewed By: Idris Dag-Ellams [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2006 19:00 EST
Comment/Review:
That was kinda funny seeing how Goten was beaten by his own sister. All I can say is update. I wanna see how it ends.
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Title: same ideas
Reviewed By: Idris Dag-Ellams [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 17:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are not many people but still some people that have one main factor. They believe that Goten should have a twin sister. I belive so to! But in my story, his twin sister's name is Chiaki. It looks like your story on the go to a happy ending. Keep up the good work! ^_^
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