| "The Tough Ones" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Reviewed By: lupingirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 20:27 CST
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this is a great story. I ike it! I can't wait to read devastation.
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Reviewed By: Dark Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2002 22:44 CDT
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short...very short. but some of the best things come in small packeges and this is definitly good. oh and when i was saying short i was talking 'bout the ch. ch. 17.
~*~Dark Princess~*~ |
Reviewed By: Trunks' Girl 787 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2002 21:03 CDT
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You better not end it there. Continue soon! |
Reviewed By: fire97 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2002 20:04 CDT
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More More More this is an excelent fan-fic your english needs a little work but other than that this is an excellent fanfick I want More |
Reviewed By: Lane On: May 01, 2002 18:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to use alot more commas. LOL.Where is the sex???Is this NC17 or G.Aeka should be taken by Vegeta(if you know what i meen). |
Reviewed By: fire97 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2002 12:29 CDT
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more more more |
Reviewed By: Dark Prince [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2002 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your work is very good. Your grammar is a little
off, however I like the way you twist the original plot. |
Reviewed By: Anime 88 On: April 25, 2002 19:21 CDT
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Great fic! Kepp up the great work! write more. |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2002 05:50 CDT
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ARG!!! evil ppl and there evil planes. what is there an evil ppl club on this site i dont know about cause you seem to be the club master with such an evil mind.im siting here practily coughing my eyes out and you leave me at a HUGE cliffhanger.*sigh* i hate it when ppl do that.
you must put up more ASAP,
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: fire97 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2002 23:02 CDT
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more more is reoko going to blow up the world or what? |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2002 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I reviewed ha! This is a great story. Good English :) |
Reviewed By: fire97 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2002 17:04 CDT
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an excelent fan fic please finish there are several chapters left from what I can tell |
Reviewed By: fire97 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2002 16:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you did a fantastic job of getting the personalities of the characters down right just the way bobbity's ship takes energy is wrong only if they take damage and lose energy that way does the ship take energy |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2002 20:38 CST
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OK IM REVIEWING NOW...put up more!!!
have a nice day(or night),
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2002 20:49 CST
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! you stoped. why did you stop and right befor they get to fight the second dude. :(
need more ch.'s,
:)mizu:P |
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