Reviewed By: Mimi, Myself, & Iz. [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2002 18:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful! Wow! Really amazing writing of a character still young at heart difficulty to hide her feelings than it is to share them. Especially to a friend like Renamon. Besides being once conceaved as just data, Renamon that would guard Ruki at the sake of her own life.
Absolutely beautiful work! Wonderfully written story I've read about young Ruki and Renamon's undenying frienship they share. Even though Ruki is the main focus of thoughts in your story, you really explored the two characters well. I really love the part where Renamon admits to Ruki of all she has done for Ruki, she still longs for Ruki's aproval not just a fighting partner but companionship. ...even if it is nothing but silent nod or a smile from Ruki.
Great writing!
~ Jodi S. |
