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| "When Morning Comes" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Angel of forgotten souls [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 17:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
yeah! That was awsome! Please continue!
| Reviewed By: Darkness Child [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 21:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Evil cliffhanger, evil. Please, please, PLEASE update soon. Your stories grab my intrest and I really like that you brought Kurama back, I was very unhappy when you killed him. ^_^
| Reviewed By: Deannamay On: January 09, 2006 16:05 CST
Comment/Review:
Two-shot huh? I think the self-limited stories are a little more easy to write, as you have a goal already in mind. Long stories I think there is a tendency to get a little lost along the way. Big Kurama/Hiei fan, am happy that Kurama is alive at the end of the story. I always thought Kurama was the lynch pin of the group. Hiei is the strength, Yuusuke is the soul, and Kuwabara is the heart, but Kurama is the mind and discipline. The mind binds the other three together so they are a force. Obviously Koenma thought differently. More obviously, not anymore. Looking forward to seeing Kurama bring Hiei back to him, and a sweet reunion it should be.
| Title: General (duh!)
Reviewed By: The Dot Army General On: January 04, 2006 16:36 CST
Comment/Review:
W00t! You used my pacing idea!!! ^_^ ...*at a loss for things to say* Obviously, you know me. You know I don't normally read H/K fics. You know I like songfics. You know I like having my ideas used. Thus, good outweighs bad. Oh. One more thing. CLIFFHANGER HAS A DOT!!!!! Much support and wish for update --- The Dot Army General (MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA --- *hackCOUGHwheeze* --- oh MAN I gotta remember to breathe when I do that...) ...bye now!
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