| "A Letter to Myself" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Shinashi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 17:46 CDT
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I really like them all- maybe I'm biased because I like good poems (can't write my own!) Umm.. I'm not too smart on poems or riddles like that but just thinking about what colors are who or what person the person is about in the first poem is really interesting! :D
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Title: Oooo o.o talent!
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 21:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sad, but cute...in a depressing way (that makes no sense!) Poeticlly vague, deliciously simple, adorablly sad. Write on milady!
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Reviewed By: Keta master of shadows [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 11:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's great setup. and a great topic, but i just dident feel like you put enough emotion into it. sort of plain. And is it Wufei.
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Reviewed By: Leslie On: January 26, 2006 11:11 CST
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Its Herro right? The 'Perfect Soldier'. Well written, plenty of angst...I LOVE IT!!!
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Reviewed By: ~Eva On: January 07, 2006 14:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not going to pretend I can understand what this person is going through, but I remember about a year ago I was in a position where I felt people were forcing me to be 'perfect' in sacrifice of my personality, I began to never voice any criticisms and bottle up until the only thing I could say was 'how are you?' I started to hurt myself in little ways around that point but my friends made me talk about it and helped me through everything. This poem is so beautiful. It is stunningly written and if you can understand emotions as clearly as you've conveyed in this piece then I'm sure that you'll be able to find a way to help her if, and I pray it is, that ending line is fictional.
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