| "Memory" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: Child Xylia (I have an account.)
Reviewed By: Child Xylia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH. MY GOD. WOW. Okay, first off, I love you. That was absoultely...perfect. Second, I love you. This story just completely...REEKS of Fullmetal Alchemist plot and characters. Seriously, I swear Hiromu Arakawa wrote this. Third...I love you? Al, you're my hero. Can anyone say "favourite!"?
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Reviewed By: Merwick [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 18:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm...not sure exactly what I can say other than "wow." I really found myself reading deep into your story and dreading the ending though it, too, was well done. =) It ties in so well with the anime itself that, once again, all I can think to say is "wow" and maybe a "great job!" ^_^
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Reviewed By: devildice708 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 23:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well-written and it captured the same emotions you get when watching the anime or reading the manga. I loved it. ^_^
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Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2006 11:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Great job Sarah, there aren't enough FMA pieces worth reading and what a perfect gift for Teh Sue. Beautifully written angst and what a wonderful turnaround to end on a hopeful note. Thanks for sharing!
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Reviewed By: neverreviewingbeta On: January 13, 2006 02:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing piece of writing. You do a phenomenal job at capturing the emotion and characterization in this one-shot. It truly reads like a continuation of the anime, and I wish this was the story we get afterwards. Wonderful job. I loved it. =)
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Reviewed By: futekioosha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2006 00:13 CST
Comment/Review:
interesting take on the path that Al would choose to find his way back to Ed. This is a wonderful One-shot and a great gift to sue. You did a great job capturing the confusion and determination of Al to find Ed again. I especially loved the beginning scene between Winry and Al. Awesome job Sarah! Thanks for sharing :-) ~fute~
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Reviewed By: inuyoukaimama (nsi) On: January 12, 2006 23:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Awwwwwwwww! That was so bitter sweet! Well done Sarah! Very nice work! C.
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Title: Happy Birthday to ME!!!
Reviewed By: Sueric [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 23:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow ... I just love it! You know how much I ADORE FMA ... and I LOVE IT!!! ... This is just a beautiful piece, and the angst is so well done! Great job on that, and thank you for the absolutely perfect birthday gift! You have no idea just how much I loved this fic. :) It's just lovely!
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