| "Ah great, another breach." Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: kirallie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 01:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Neat! So what was the light that transported them? Waiting and hoping for more soon!!
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Reviewed By: Rath On: April 15, 2006 04:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!!That's pretty good.Any chance you can focus on Yusuke more? And I thought Genki taught Yusuke to heal himself? At least that's what it looked like in his battle with Sensui(not sure if that's how his name is spelt).You know when he pulled his gun hand out and shot Yusuke full of holes.Oh well,this is your story so I guess you can do what you want.(But,I still hope you focus on Yusuke more,and the fact that he is a pretty strong half demon.)^-^ I will now look forward to reading more of this story,as soon as you can update.Good luck!!!^__^
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Title: The Otaku
Reviewed By: Fionn On: April 09, 2006 12:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic so far, I can't wait for more! Hopefully Kurama will noutice Kyuubi. However the Hokahe dosen't rule the land of fire the Daimyo does that the Hokage is in charge to the countries ninja and to some extent it's non-ninja military.
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Reviewed By: AA On: April 05, 2006 14:00 CDT
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goods goods!!!! very nice, still kinda waiting for some interesting stuff to happen but its cool. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Yoshikiri On: April 02, 2006 03:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story. It kept my attention and left me wanting more. Some problems with punctuation and sentence structuring, but the ideas are still conveyed well enough (though it wouldn't hurt to get a beta/proof-reader). I hope to read more soon *nod*
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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2006 21:54 CST
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For some odd reason, after the girl came in and said 'Welcome to hell...' I have the sudden image of Hiei spread out on a table (Chained down mind you) and being tortured. Don't ask me why it wasn't Yusuke. This is a pretty good story, I have read many YYH/Naru fics, and this one is good. Hope to read more of it. Ja!
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Reviewed By: hackneyqueenextreme [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2006 22:19 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. You must continue this. I have not read many Naruto fics before, but I think that I should start. Did you have another user name or did you post other stories on a different site because you said that you should finish your other stories. We must continue our e-mail conversations. They truly make my day. -Tabs-
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Reviewed By: Abarai Renji [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 15:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, this was awesome! I can't wait to read the next chapter!! Very nice, very nice indeed.
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Reviewed By: Amine ^^ On: February 01, 2006 21:17 CST
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KOOL!!!! i was DYIN 4 sum Naruto/Yu Yu Hakusho crossover!!! umm... will Kurama b entering soon?
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Reviewed By: Ai Hemora [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 19:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was good, good description and kept me interested write some more....
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