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| "FAKE in Love: Act XVI, Healing and Memory" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Reviewed By: Insert_Pseudonym [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2013 11:43 EDT
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This was nice "flangst" indead! ;D And now I want to see some baby photos of Dee, too. By the way, I didn't feel sorry for Erin at all. The bastard deserved it. But poor Bikky, I hope his leg heals quickly! :D | Reviewed By: Travellyr On: May 03, 2006 22:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really, really love this. flangst! I adore flangst. Reading this is like bed- I just want to curl up in it and snuggle and be happy. This is incredibly relaxing and comfortable and comforting to read; knowing that these two bozos are warm and happy and loved makes me warm and happy too. ^___^ Thanks for sharing.
| Reviewed By: NoodleSub (logged off) On: March 25, 2006 22:49 EST
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>< Ahh! I'm guilty of not reviewing (I know better, I love getting reviews!) but I love Fake and I love your series. The way you write the characters is so . . . convincing, you really capture them. Also any original characters you introduce-- they're well developed, they fit smoothly into the plot and they aren't outragious. Too many people write characters that, if unintentionally, outshine the cannon characters. You have my respect as a fellow author!(though none of my stories are posted yet^^; I want to complete it before I post anything) I hope you continue writing, I'm going to read the next act now ^^
| Reviewed By: sabacat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 14:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAH! I've been so busy lately I haven't had time to check on here for new goodies... and when I finally do, I find another awesome fic of yours! My day was totally made by it! You have such good characterization...you really crawl into Dee and Ryo's head and totally become them! I swear, your fics are addicting!!!
| Reviewed By: maylee [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2006 19:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everything gets a ten! Your stories are the best I've found anywhere! Thanks again for writing your stories. Maylee
| Reviewed By: maylee [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2006 19:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just wanted to say that this, as well as all your other Fake fanfics, was wonderful! I greatly enjoy reading your work, and I always look forward to reading your stories. Thank you so very much for wrting and posting your incredibly fantastic tales of Dee and Ryo so that others can read them. By the way, I love that you introduced Erin. I know others don't really care for him, but I think it's great that Ryo has someone hitting on him again. It's just too funny! All your stories are just wonderful and I hope that you continue writing more sagas in the lives of Ryo and Dee. Thanks again for the great stories! Maylee
| Reviewed By: Xo Shu Mhing [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 00:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, Blue said it best! Can't agree more! Wonderful as always. If I was Sanami Matoh, and I read your stuff I'd want to adapt it! But alas, I'm not. Always worth the wait!
| Title: YAAY! I'm First
Reviewed By: BlueSimplicity [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2006 17:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GD - What a wonderful treatise on sadness, grief, memories and healing. With your last piece, you left us all gasping and wondering what was going to happen to our beloved boys next. In this Act, you bring it around full circle. In your wonderfully mature and in depth way, you provide such a realistic portrayal of what happens to the human heart when it mourns and how it heals. This last act was absolutely breathtaking - your language was stunning, the emotions you covered so realistic, the overall mood so perfectly balanced and atmospheric, but never falling into the oh-too-easy trap of becoming overdramatic. You do the BEST Ryo and Dee as a couple out there, and yet, ironically enough, by separating them in this piece, you show how strong their bond together really is. You always reveal wonderful insights into their characters as well. This is your 16th act, and yet still, I feel like whenever I read a piece of yours I'm still learning things about Dee and Ryo. (Dee needing quiet to deal with his grief, Ryo's revelation of having killed someone in the line of duty, etc.) It was a WONDERFUL and BEAUTIFUL piece, quiet and subtle and full of so much. One of my favourites in the entire series, and a beautiful conclusion to an intense cliffhanger. You never cease to amaze me, NEVER. How you manage to do all of these things to our boys and still keep them so in character, how you continue to make this storyline fascinating and one I hunger to read - all of these things stand as an open testament to how powerful and wonderful a writer you truly are. Please please please update soon. Your own life be damned - you know all of your fans will be waiting for your next piece with bated breath. XO, BlueSimplciity
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