| "Racing the Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: midnoghtdreamer On: April 05, 2007 17:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolultly loved it... i loved it cause it was in kagome's POV.. it's usually in inuyasha and not that many are made with her's.. oh also the fact that he BROKE the promise and not just asked her and everything else came out however kikyou wanted it.. loved that too... but i loved the lemon more.. ^_^
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Reviewed By: dudekiller(nsi) On: April 23, 2006 19:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
i liked this fic. good job.
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Reviewed By: ur face On: April 04, 2006 16:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was awshome
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Reviewed By: veryhappyreader On: February 13, 2006 17:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story was great i really enjoyed it i can not wait to read more of your stories post more soon please!!!!!! Oh and i appreciate the fact that you said that we did not have to review that reading was enough. becuase i usually don't review it great to see someone not whining and begging for reviews when i see that it always makes me not want to review
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Title: Beautifully Done
Reviewed By: UsakoSerenity [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 01:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was beautifully done. You vey nicely captured to mental dilemma that has to be playing in Inuyasha's head constantly. And so effectively argued the way that Kagome must truly feel about him. I hope you do keep writing as I thouroughly enjoy reading your work. Keep an eye on your uploads though there was hmtl stuff in the text of it and that can turn people off to reading it, thinking that its just full of typos...I know I almost closed the window and I am very glad I didnt. Keep up the good work
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Title: Awsome with some CC
Reviewed By: tetsuya yamatashi (not logged on) On: January 26, 2006 00:00 CST
Comment/Review:
So adorable. Though just some constructive critism, I think the part where Inuyasha is explaining why he chose Kagome (the village bit) seemed a bit 'run on'. I don't know, it was like he was saying everything directly instead of just recalling. But that's just what I thought. Love the story to bits, though. I seriously think you should continue. Looking forward to more.
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Title: hhhhhhhhhh
Reviewed By: hiiiiiii On: January 22, 2006 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: cool story
Reviewed By: ffhgfdsgh On: January 22, 2006 22:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think this was a great story keep it up but next time withthe paragraphs don't do that ns&p thing kind of annoying otherwise keep it up
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Reviewed By: stargazer824 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2006 23:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Beautifully written!!! I really liked how the story was told from Kagome's point of view.
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Title: this is great!
Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2006 14:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! I love the idea that they get together and share those passionate moments! It was truely beautiful! This is a masterpiece! Keep it up!
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Title: wow...
Reviewed By: InuYashaLover_04 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2006 14:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really good, as well as entertainig. I like the way your write. It was cute, and not to intense. The story line was really sweet. You should definatly continue writing... I would love to see more from you.
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Reviewed By: ergo On: January 16, 2006 13:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very cute :) I would love to see more from you definitely. A fix in the paragraph would be nice, however, as they all start with a rather annoying ns&p or something similar.
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Title: ...reviewing!
Reviewed By: WhiteDragonsAmethyst [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2006 06:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY. who knows why, i'm insane. you should make another something like this...... maybe a songfic. something like evanescence. maybe lies...or going under...anyway, just some suggestions. and a review. xD first review! i don't get any either...;_; anywho, I LIKE FANFICTION!!! *drools* yeah. i'm insane.
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