| "A New Begining" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Silver On: June 05, 2002 19:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was alright |
Reviewed By: BL On: May 30, 2002 21:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this! It's one of the funniest fics I've seen in a while! Evil plushie! Evil Jess! I like the writing style, clear and easy to follow. But poor Michiru! and poor Haruka after that, for that matter... how sad ;_; but the first chapter wins over that just for being so %&$# funny!!! concept is fun. Write more! |
Reviewed By: Leah/ SailorLJupiter On: May 12, 2002 16:26 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I did see a few Grammar Erros but the wernt really i big deal. I think it is origonal, just not 10 worth. It was enjoyable i just dont agree with the lesiban love part, but for being a love story bout any 2 ppl it was enjoyable. I give it a 8, it was done really well. |
Reviewed By: Katrina Kadabra [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2002 22:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting concept... Michiru never struck me as the emotionaly unstable type. Perhaps a bit more background to how she got to this state would be better. It seemed Jess sort of moved in to take Michiru's place, looking interestingly enough like Michiru herself, only with red hair.
Well, anyway, pretty good job. (You're getting this repeating "&rdquo" thing, maybe you can try to edit that out in the future to make it look more professional.) |
Reviewed By: venus_goddess_of_love [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2002 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fanfic! I like they way you added a new character in, and her persdonality is teh bomb!@ This is the first story I've read with this kind of idea,,, its wonderful! |
