| "Integral gets a break" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Amythyst [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2007 18:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would suggest using quotation marks for statements to make it reader friendly. I would have rated it higher but it was rather hard to read.
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Reviewed By: angelicyokai On: December 01, 2006 02:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a cute and relatively well written fic, but your lack of quotation marks ie: "..." makes the story very hard to follow. Not bad on the whole though.
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Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly On: April 27, 2006 22:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
If you're going to post, have the courtesy to put speech into quotation marks. I can't read this for the lack of where description and speech end and begin.
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