| "concrete angel" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: InLoveAndOut On: June 17, 2007 17:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
awesome really awesome and good update please!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sayuri-kun On: October 07, 2006 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW I LOVE YUR STORY!!!!!!! PLZ UPDATE FAIRLY SOON BUT DON'T RUSH THOSE LONGER CHAPIES!!!^.^
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Reviewed By: lovely liz On: March 30, 2006 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i realy like this story, cant wait to read what happen next. i realy like that you made kogme a little bad chick but yet herself its cool. so how did kagome get a castle, it jest pop out of no where, that people in side knew her and wiated for her to show up its kinda creapy and weird. but still cant wait for u to countiue the story but i am still going to wait i know how schoolis with giving a lot of homework and stuff. :P :)
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Reviewed By: phoenix_darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 23:04 CST
Comment/Review:
its dudette not dude
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: devilws angel 115 On: March 16, 2006 21:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was so good you need to write more dude is is so cool
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Reviewed By: INUYOKIA87 On: March 12, 2006 19:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT REALLY GOOD PLEZ WRITE MORE, I USED THE P WORD
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Title: Concrete Angel
Reviewed By: Lost Star [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 10:09 CST
Comment/Review:
I loved the new chapter, but you had me kind of worried when you had Kagome kiss Miroku. But, I was thinking why don't you create a person that is a mix of Kagome and Sango for Miroku, since he seems to like both of them? One question though why hasn't Sango noticed Miroku?
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Title: Concrete Angel
Reviewed By: Lost Star [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 14:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is great and I love everything about it. I can't wait for you to update. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. PLEASSSSSSSSSSSSE.
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Reviewed By: KagomeStanton [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2006 17:05 CST
Comment/Review:
all of your ands are ans and its annoying.... but thats the only problem i can find! good job overall! update soon!!
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Reviewed By: alissa On: February 10, 2006 20:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like it most people make kagome a little baby who needs to be saved all the time!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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