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Title: fawn of the woods
Reviewed By: fawn of the woods [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2007 03:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude how can you have status completed?????!?? plz finish, is inu-kun going to wake up? what'll happen when the wish is recinded? come on!!!
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Reviewed By: Kirara_Cutie316 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2006 08:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome story. cant wait for the next chappy. at first the story was hard to follow but easy to get used to. verry original. Update soon! (^._.^)/*
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Title: Great!!!
Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 14:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon!!! I loved your story. I decided to finally leave a comment!! I can't wait to see what happens! I love your originality!
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Title: Hello.
Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 11:50 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good story, and I hope that you will update soon.
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Reviewed By: zilverphire [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 20:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is going so great!!!!!! I'm all intrigued (is that how you write it?) now and I really want to know what's going to happen next. Update soon!!!! Please and Thank You! ~zilverphyre
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Reviewed By: inuyashalover1221 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 14:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whats up!!! I wanna correct you,this chappy is awsome! You should really do some artwork for this fic. Thanks for mentioning my fic,glad you like'ed it. Danielle
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Title: In two minds...
Reviewed By: foxfire79 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 03:05 CDT
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I'm still not sure why this chapter isn't working for me properly (Interlude 3). I realize that the transition between Kikyo and Kagome hating each other then suddenly making up again is a bit too rushed, so I'm still kinda nuggeting it out in my brain. I decided to post it up though, because the chapter in it's entirety was basically working - I might have to do a rewrite sooner or later, but from reading this 'bare bones' version of what was going through my mind I hope everyone got the gist of it! I'm pretty happy with everything after Kikyo snaps back to her senses though - I just have to work on how she gets to that point! Hahaha, I just reviewed my own story again! I just don't want the fairies to die!
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Reviewed By: animecrazedgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2006 21:58 CST
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Here's my usual two reviews! Update soon! I love this story! You are doing a splendid job at this! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: animecrazedgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2006 21:57 CST
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Yay! You wrote it! I loved it! You didn't have to apologize! It was okay! I was just wondering what happened! So don't worry so much! 'kay? Anyways, this was a really good chap! I just dying to know what happens next! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Hanajima [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2006 17:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice chapter. I am especially happy with the fact that you kept Kikyou a good person at the end - I think you did a good job of maintaining her character as if it were the real series. Oooh, now I really don't know what's going to happen next! >< I'll be waiting for the next chapter! Ah, and happy birthday (late, but oh well)!
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Reviewed By: From Inu4ever On: April 01, 2006 08:16 CST
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Good to see you again! Happy belated birthday! Your fighting fish sounds adorable! Glad you had a fun time at the beach..This was an awesome chapter! I can't wait to see how you bring the past and the future back together again! Have a great weekend!
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Reviewed By: osuwariboy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2006 07:31 CST
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Well, what can I say... I'm too goodhearted to let fairies die so I guess I'll review he he he. Well, one thing that threw me off a little was Kagome and Kikyo's interaction. They just went from hating each other to making up a bit too rapidly for my own comfort. However, the rest of the chapter was so well constructed that I was able to let it pass easily. And then the ending... I always find a sort of sadistic pleasure in seeing Naraku thrown off guard, so I really liked it... and what's more, I do think that someone just woke up behind Kagome he he he. Well, that's it for now, keep up the good work, I can't wait for the next chapter :).
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Reviewed By: animecrazedgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 20:29 CST
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Excuse me but...... What's taking so long? You really need to update! I'm dying to know what happens next! Please update SOON! I simpley LOVE this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PPPPPLLLLLEEEEEEEAAAAAASSSSSEEEEEE UUUUPPPPPPDDDDDDAAAAAATTTTTEEEEE SSSSSOOOOOOOOOONNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Reviewed By: Hanajima [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 01:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh! Stupid cliffie! I really, really want Inuyasha to take back the wish now. A lot. ;-; I think you've topped yourself again with this chapter - it was excellent! ^-^ Yay, please keep going! Oh, and I thought that the zombies were a good idea. You're right, it's better to have her do something besides her wind attacks once in a while. Great job again!
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Reviewed By: osuwariboy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2006 22:40 CST
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Well, my only comment about this whole story so far is... Wow!!!!! It's really impressive what you managed to do with the characters. I sort of like Kagome's new style and find myself thinking it'd be nice if she could keep that when/if Inuyasha reverts his wish. In any case, update soon, I'm hanging on the edge of my seat right now ;).
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