| "Redwall Cluny Returns" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: darkestrose [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 17:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Erm.. a couple of things.. I think you need to re-classify it, this is red hawk. Also, was that the whole story? It was extremely confusing. :sweatdrop: It might be just me though. Also, your spelling/grammar/SOW needs MAJOR help. It wouldn't hurt to get a beta, then I'm sure you could turn this into a much better fanfic! ;)
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Title: great story
Reviewed By: bookgurl101 On: March 20, 2004 13:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story it was really good but you should try to work out your spelling a bit more. Other than that it's good to know that someone can write good redwall ficS.
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Reviewed By: due On: February 27, 2004 19:32 CST
Comment/Review:
this is red hawk, not redwall. redwall sux
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