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Reviewed By: SoloTalent [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2006 14:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heyhey for there arent much storys which involve hentai and are good , this story is pretty good I think . I think Ranma as you showed him is realistic considering he trained under Happosai for eleven years . I think too , that Ryouga is the most stupid character from the Ranma universe , so I like that in your story . I bet Nodoka will be having no trouble accepting this Ranma , even with his curse . So keep up the good work and update soon :)
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Reviewed By: Sadfru On: September 07, 2006 04:09 EDT
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Ist review of any of your stories so I thought I would do a sweeping review and just say that they rock! Like this Ranma and the idea behind Happosai's training does fit while allowing for the fact he is still an evil bastard (but strangly enough still one of my favourite characters), also hoping you don't go the NymphoKasumi approach that most take but wouldn't complain if you did. With your storm warning fics I am curious about who the main character is, is it ranma or an OC, but then agian his attitude seems more like an honourable sane and uncursed (pig or loss of direction) version of Ryoga, but that is just from memories of the story 5-6 months ago so excuse if I'm completly off In any case, luv your work and hope for it to continue for a long time to come :) PS if you wish to comment or insult my intelligence on any points my email is sadfru at yahoo dot com dot au.
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Reviewed By: basteng On: August 31, 2006 09:55 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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the concept of a ranma trained by happosai is very fun to read...to think i've waited months for you to update and now that you did, i am not disappointed...but dont wait another 4-5 months just to update again...LOL...
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Reviewed By: TJG On: August 29, 2006 03:12 EDT
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Good story. Does Ranma really need an emotion ki projectile? He could study Tatewaki's distance pressure attacks with his boken and make an unarmed variant so he would not need to use emotion ki attacks. If he develops it enough, he might unknowingly re-invent Genma's vacuum blade techniques under the Yama Sen Kens. If Ranma really needs to develop an emotion ki attack how about using a different emotion like those listed under the Franklin Reality Model which had 4 basic drives of: survival, to love or be loved, self-importance (faceted by pride and depression), and need for variety (faceted by interest and boredom). Given the focus of dynamic variety of his martial arts style having an emotion based on the interest on variety might be good (love of learning? puzzle solving?).
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Reviewed By: Gaurtoth [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 19:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well just wanted to say that I really like your story and I'm eager for more. One more reason for Happosai to be nicer is that he loves kids (as we saw with Hinako) so he would have been nicer to Ranma than to Soun and Genma will they were training.
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Reviewed By: Awesome On: August 28, 2006 17:22 EDT
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Excellent job. I'm loving it. I hope to see more soon.
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 11:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story. I definitely want to read more. As for Ranma, is he cursed? I believe that no hentai Ranma story is complete without him changung sexes.
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Title: Looks Good
Reviewed By: DrewB1442 On: May 04, 2006 09:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Will you finish this soon? It could be very good.
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Reviewed By: GMusick On: February 10, 2006 01:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. I've always enjoyed your stories so one more is just icing on the cake. I'm interested in seeing how everyone has changed as well, good times ahead. Oh, and bravo for the Akane bit. I don't see how they ended up together when all his other finacess were so delectable. Ranma has brain damage indeed.
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Title: Hmm.
Reviewed By: j0 On: January 31, 2006 23:09 EST
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Looks very promising - keep it up. I'll rate it when there is a bit more written. :)
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Reviewed By: pspinler [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 23:54 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderfully creative! Great humor! Very good writing! I'd very much like to see more of this. -- Pat
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Reviewed By: pspinler [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 23:54 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderfully creative! Great humor! Very good writing! I'd very much like to see more of this. -- Pat
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Reviewed By: goku_90504 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 04:16 EST
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akanes looks last of ranmas girls her cooking last out of the entire human race her fighting skills on par with ukyo barehanded maybe even better than ukyo bare handed but akane's personailty is sadly the best dispite her temper she's never tryed to drug ranma or force him to marry aginst his will something that ukyo kodachi and shampoo are all guilty of if akane learned to control her temper she would be easly the best of ranma's girls
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Reviewed By: AzureSky [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2006 20:35 EST
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Great start. So Ranma can recharge his ki from having sex with women? lol I want to see the ripple effect.
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Reviewed By: Wizard Surreal [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2006 13:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
One question, are you in need of a pre-reader? Because I'd be more than happy to help (I'm also, coincidentally, over 18 ^^) Well, until later! Haven't seen enough of the story to get a full glimpse of what the correct ratings should be but right now they're based on only the first 2 chapters.
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