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Reviewed By: Vld On: October 17, 2014 06:29 EDT
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Just going on commenting a particular bit of the chapter... and the
question about Sailor Moon and other Sailor Senshis not appearing
immediately. I think the scene with the black haired girl in the
suite, while good, is not necessary. Well, it is because we all
want to see that kind of things otherwise we'd go for other
ratings, but as far as the story itself goes, i think that scene
would be necessary if, and ONLY IF that girl was supposed to be a
somehow major part. Which to me means that the girl is an actual
known character. So, let's see... she's black haired, which limits
the possibilities a great deal. I mean, in Ranma and Sailor Moon,
there only are a handful of black haired teenagers. My candidates
for her are Kodachi (besides, she'd be in that kind of things), one
of the Fake Tendo sisters (the older one, i don't remember her
name), Ukyo (doubtful unless her and Ranma didn't meet in
childhood), for Ranma 1/2, or either Rei or one of Usagi's three
main girl classmates, the one with black hair which i don't
remember the name of. That would make sense since it's a Ranma/SM
crossover.
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Reviewed By: mackon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2010 02:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Honestly this is one of the most interesting Ranma's that diverted from canon I've read. The lemon is fun but if your not comfortable with writing in that style any more just continue on without it, the story stands on its own.
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Title: Good fun.
Reviewed By: mackon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2010 02:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its a shame this hasn't been updated in so long, this fic is IMO one of the best Smarter Ranma fics around and is certainly the best Happosai as Ranma's Teacher I've ever seen. Even without the porn for extra fun and spice its a great story just sadly way way too short. Any chance of the Author getting back to this fic? Its good porn fun AU on the character's and just a really decent Ranma fic. Anyway Thanks for Sharing.
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Reviewed By: sevant of Kyuubi On: January 14, 2007 18:55 EST
Comment/Review:
WHAT THE HELL?!?! It isn't "Ranma 1/2" without gender-switching psychos!
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Reviewed By: Shakeval [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 02:51 EDT
Comment/Review:
great stuff, i like how ranma is turning out. this is a ranma i would really like to see in an anime episode. kinda unfortunate how ranma's external ki projection is so low and undeveloped. well as you said that is for later, so good chapter and hope for more soon.
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Reviewed By: goku_90504 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2006 06:13 EDT
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happosai i see as childish with way to much power and a major case of perverson he's not a killer but he is a bully he's not evil but he's hardly a good guy either akane is childish and a major prude plus very scared and she hides that fear behind anger though i do find your having her call ranma a cheater a bit odd when in cannon does she accuse people of cheating? (im not saying it doesnt happen i am just saying i cant recall when if ever after all in cannon akane is the ONLY one who cared about ranma as a person rather than a trophy or prize as proven by the band aid episode)
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Reviewed By: Neil Lennon On: September 18, 2006 02:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE! MORE! MORE!
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Reviewed By: SoloTalent [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2006 14:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heyhey for there arent much storys which involve hentai and are good , this story is pretty good I think . I think Ranma as you showed him is realistic considering he trained under Happosai for eleven years . I think too , that Ryouga is the most stupid character from the Ranma universe , so I like that in your story . I bet Nodoka will be having no trouble accepting this Ranma , even with his curse . So keep up the good work and update soon :)
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Reviewed By: Sadfru On: September 07, 2006 04:09 EDT
Comment/Review:
Ist review of any of your stories so I thought I would do a sweeping review and just say that they rock! Like this Ranma and the idea behind Happosai's training does fit while allowing for the fact he is still an evil bastard (but strangly enough still one of my favourite characters), also hoping you don't go the NymphoKasumi approach that most take but wouldn't complain if you did. With your storm warning fics I am curious about who the main character is, is it ranma or an OC, but then agian his attitude seems more like an honourable sane and uncursed (pig or loss of direction) version of Ryoga, but that is just from memories of the story 5-6 months ago so excuse if I'm completly off In any case, luv your work and hope for it to continue for a long time to come :) PS if you wish to comment or insult my intelligence on any points my email is sadfru at yahoo dot com dot au.
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Reviewed By: basteng On: August 31, 2006 09:55 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
the concept of a ranma trained by happosai is very fun to read...to think i've waited months for you to update and now that you did, i am not disappointed...but dont wait another 4-5 months just to update again...LOL...
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Reviewed By: TJG On: August 29, 2006 03:12 EDT
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Good story. Does Ranma really need an emotion ki projectile? He could study Tatewaki's distance pressure attacks with his boken and make an unarmed variant so he would not need to use emotion ki attacks. If he develops it enough, he might unknowingly re-invent Genma's vacuum blade techniques under the Yama Sen Kens. If Ranma really needs to develop an emotion ki attack how about using a different emotion like those listed under the Franklin Reality Model which had 4 basic drives of: survival, to love or be loved, self-importance (faceted by pride and depression), and need for variety (faceted by interest and boredom). Given the focus of dynamic variety of his martial arts style having an emotion based on the interest on variety might be good (love of learning? puzzle solving?).
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Reviewed By: Gaurtoth [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 19:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well just wanted to say that I really like your story and I'm eager for more. One more reason for Happosai to be nicer is that he loves kids (as we saw with Hinako) so he would have been nicer to Ranma than to Soun and Genma will they were training.
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Reviewed By: Awesome On: August 28, 2006 17:22 EDT
Comment/Review:
Excellent job. I'm loving it. I hope to see more soon.
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 11:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story. I definitely want to read more. As for Ranma, is he cursed? I believe that no hentai Ranma story is complete without him changung sexes.
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Title: Looks Good
Reviewed By: DrewB1442 On: May 04, 2006 09:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Will you finish this soon? It could be very good.
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