"Vicissitude" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 02:54 CST Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: AHHHHHH!!!!!! i love ur story u totally have a great plot and everything. there were a few grammer errors but thats ok. plz plz plz keep writeing. update soon. u rock.
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 21:53 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow. Kagome was so funny when she was teasing Snago to open the door. I swear I was luaghing my head off when she said that Sango and Miroku were... LOL. Anyways, I understand where Kags is coming from. But isn't she the least bit happy and elated to see Inuyasha again? And Inu sees a bit dense on how him leaving effected Kags. I mean if he really loved her shouldn't he have thought about how she'd handle the separation? Okay, that's just me wondering. Other than that, great update and I can't wait till the next chapter. I hope Inu relizes the extent of Kags pain. And I hope Kag's learns to forgive. I mean it wasn't his fault he had to move away. And in the end, I hope that they can get along and learn to love again. Okay okay, I'm done. LOL. Great update and I can't wait to the next. Cool story, good job!!! ;-) -TrinityK
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: February 26, 2006 17:08 CST Comment/Review: yEAH i SAYS SHE TOOK IT PRETTY WELL! Inuyasha didn't want ot move he had to. Hopefully she will get used to it. I mean they live in the same dorm and have the same group of friends.I can't wait till you write the next chapter!^@^
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Reviewed By: i_kill_faeries_cause_im_evil (NSI) On: February 26, 2006 14:35 CST Comment/Review: Thanks for updating so quick!!! If my reviews make you update faster, sooner, better then I will review after every read!!! Once again, awesome job, keep it up!!
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Reviewed By: i_kill_faeries_cause_im_evil (NSI) On: February 26, 2006 09:37 CST Comment/Review: A lot of Inuyasha AU college stories suck, because they have them meet in the first chapter and in the same chapter have them fall in love. This one is really good, and you haven't made many grammar or spelling errors. Thanks for a good story, please try to update soon!
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: February 25, 2006 20:39 CST Comment/Review: They are so close to finding each other. How will Kagome react? She still has feelings for Inuyasha.Please let the next chapter come soon.^@^
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 23:00 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: the plot is designed right now on a good cute level. there are a couple things that caught my eye that don't happen wiht college acceptance, but next to that, you're pretty much on key. i would highly suggest that you take out all your side notes throughout the chapters. it can really distract the eye when reading and destroy any type of vibe that the reader has going. i like the fact that they will be reuinted with inu, obviously, soon enough. that can promise to be interesting. you have an interesting story here, good luck with it. ^__^
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