| "The Lost Child" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Igasu On: July 14, 2006 00:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Not intentionally rude and sorry if it offends you because I imagine most people would be offended by this comment, but Bianca seems like a Mary Sue sort of person. Kurama seems a bit OOC, but it really is a good story basis; the dangerous betrayed child sort-of thing.. it's a nice work I guess.
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Title: YOSH!
Reviewed By: theSKiEisFALLING [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 21:14 CST
Comment/Review:
hiii im glad you liked my aim fic but it was a oneshot only... im sorry that i wont be able to add what you would like.... great story! WOOT! ~ theSKiEisFALLING
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Reviewed By: hackneyqueenextreme [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 13:38 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please you muse write more. HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!! you must be so excited. i love this story. update please. though one thing, did something come before this? i say this only becouse i feel that i missed something with the OCs in this story. -tabs-
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Reviewed By: Abarai Renji [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 15:51 CST
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Awesome chapter! Very nice, and I can't wait to read the next one! Now, don't take this the wrong way, but apocalypse? That's the end of the world, wouldn't it have been better to say something like, Blue Moon, or Eclipse maybe? Just saying.... Update soon!
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Title: AH!
Reviewed By: pumpkinqueen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 16:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AH! We'll be seeing the little boy now!?!? AW!!! Please update soon! This has really caught my attention! Oh yeah, lol, the conversation over the compact was funny, XD will there be more??? Anyway, this was a cute chapter, I loved the fluffy bit! ^_~
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Reviewed By: Abarai Renji [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2006 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh, good story! Very nice ^-^ I can't wait to read more! Please update quickly!!
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: pumpkinqueen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2006 16:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome, i liked this chapter! It was a very nice bled, will we be seeing Seorie again anytime soon??? ^^ I can't wait until next chapter! they're starting off towards the mountain!!!!!!!!! yay!
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Title: ha
Reviewed By: pumpkinqueen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2006 17:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha, cool, lol XD I really enjoyed reading this. I can tell Kurama makes the choices here. This is a pretty cool read, it's a time killer let me tell ya...
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Title: hM
Reviewed By: pumpkinqueen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 20:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm, Excellent job once agian. The characters seem to get along well. *someone snorts in distance* *sweatdrops* Anyway, Great job! Keep it up! BTW, when you say 'they don't know what the true crap w/ this mission is' what do you mean??? Isn't it just like, a pick up mision?
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Title: w00t!
Reviewed By: pumpkinqueen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 20:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
w00tw00tw00tw00t!!!! Awesomeness my friend! Truely a work of art! Fantabulous, honestly! The grammer needs alittle bit of work here and there, but overall this is a great work right here my friend!
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